Waiting Alone (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by * Twilah (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

Lori, you write such meaningful poetry. Once can feel the emotion in this poem.

Gloria

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 20, 2004

Deeply meaningful and soul-stirring, Lori. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

Good metaphors here. J.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

I am so glad for the footnote Lori...
But I know this poem came from deep
feelings....good poetry always does..
and you have only been writing a few
years....amazing....splendid writing..
floria
PS...you never can know what is in
store for you...always hope...

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

Why do any of us create the false realities that torment our souls? Great write Lori

Reviewed by Robert Padget (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

thats very good, I like it

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

This is a poetic joy to read Lori. It is really very good expression on a sensetive topic. glad you're ok. Anyway thanks, "it matters, truely." love and peace. G

Reviewed by Tamara Dailey-Keur (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

This is an amazing write Lori. I could feel ever line... I have been in that depression a time or two. Brilliant.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

This goes into my library Lori. It's moving, extremely insightful and exceptionally well written.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

Hard to keep it in the past.
Excellent insight.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

an excellent write Lori

there is no tomorrow
Tomorrow is but a time concept
where arrows kill hope
leaving but sorrow.
By: William Bonilla

William

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

Poet, your heart liberates in this page...This is well captured...

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

Depession is such a difficult thing to write about because it is so very personal. Know that you're not alone, dear; most of us "creative" types suffer the same fate.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

Thanks for sharing this Lori!!

Take Care!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

Tomorrow is no more than a succession of todays, and if today you're "on top", then sobeit likewise the day after! It's good to live one day at a time and not let either the past's perceived "failures" or our fears for tomorrow rob us of living THIS day fully. And yet the honest ability to assess the things that hold us is healing in itself, and your amazing capacity for this in your writing, Lori, is healing more than yourself... we are all touched deeply, I am sure, and your words are likewise balm to our souls too. Thank you for sharing this. KB

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

I see much more to you then pessimism. I see a flickering light that needs the stimulating flames of life. You will rise to the top of the world someday. Mark my words. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2004

That is a good place to keep it. Thank you.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2004

Depression is a keeper of the prisoner and you capture the depth well Lori!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 18, 2004

Why do some live in self forged dreams
Imprisoned by masks, held by chains
Dying behind an opaque veneer of truth
and unsure certainty

your poetry is always extrememly insightful, pyschological, depth ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 18, 2004

Your pen is pure gold Lori,no matter the topic, I'm always filled to the brim when I read your work!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2004

I believe it's called denial..
your writing is superb Lori...