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First Date
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He was shy, or afraid, or both,
when the music played
that first night
But not really any more than when he asked me
No, not in person, but on the phone...
“Will you, would you, could you go with me
to, a, a, that, a, dance on Friday night?"
"My mom will drop us off, but
my brother will pick us up.
It will be fun.”

And you know, it was
In a 6th grade sort of way



Sometimes, I wish guys were still like this. OK, not really... but.

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 Reviews of "First Date"
Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Excellent!

Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Great first date Lori. Made me try to rehash mine. peace. G

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
HAHAHA Yes...the shyness...the sweetness
and yet the maturity to go with it...
maybe we should try cloning some for
ourselves Lori...then I could kick my
husband out..LOL...loved this..floria

Reviewed by V. Artemis Reyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
I enjoyed this one! Reminds me of boys I used to know. I agree with you. Sometimes I wish guys were like this. Sometimes.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Love the innocence in this. Sweet.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Sigh... captured and delivered as though yesterday, Lori... you bring memories into focus with such lovely clarity. Simply charming. katy xox.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
And girls also aw gee

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
It was all so simple back then! Neither was expecting anymore than the date and the only excuse one needed was "my parents won't let me'. No stress no mess.
I loved the child in this Lori. Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 21, 2004
Beautiful rememberance of innocence Lori!!

We wish HUH?

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
There is a lot to be said for the simplicity of innocence, wonderful write Lori.
Allen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
Wonderful remembrance Lori, and yes it would be nice! At least a little like that;-)

Reviewed on March 20, 2004
I loved this, really lovely and so sweet,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
Amor said it......

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
Cute write, with the beauty of innocence written all over it.
Amor


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