My Sixth Time (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

Happy to see that everything turned out the way it did and you are here to offer your gifts!

~Joseph

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Oh,Lori. Good for you for being able to express
it openly on Authorsden. I am so thankful and PROUD too that you are Alive and here with us through the good times and bad too. I have had Many a suicide attempts myself. The last one was January 12th,2002. It has been a long road and I am sure you are quite well aware of. I will be praying for you everyday Lori. God Bless you!

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

I don't believe in suicide, never have.
What's a doll like you thinking that way anyway for?
Spend a week with ShyPoet (and my girlfriend) and I bet I can change your whole out look!
--- cause I've seen the best and worst in people!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

Brave write, definitely here for a purpose, keep up the fortitude, as you've been there you sure can help others by your univercity of life, keep on keeping on....

Reviewed by * Twilah (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

A sad poem, but reality can be sad sometimes. You have a good opportunity to help others by your poetry, and your experiences. All the best to you...

Gloria

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

The fact that you can write and write so eloquently shows that you have an awesome inner strength..this was very much felt...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 2, 2004

Lori, your cool objectivity here is chilling and expressed with such clarity that none of us reading this can dodge the issues. We are all SOOOOOOO glad that you are still with us - just look at the widespread "safety net" of well-wishers outstretched underneath me here, all just wanting to catch you should you feel unsteady! This last attempt�s been a long time now, Lori, so keep walking tall and free. What I "loved" about this write is the teasing question: "How did I get here this time?", leaving us asking, perhaps, did you mean "How did I manage to survive?" or "How did things get so bad?" You are a very gifted writer and not afraid to make yourself vulnerable in a way that is, I�m sure, a healing balm to others. We love you, girl! KB

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 1, 2004

Lori, I take it as a good sign that you can bare
your heart and soul like this.I'm so proud of you!
I know your struggle, and I see a new approach in
your attitude, I hope and pray you hold onto it
and go forward into the beautful life you deserve!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 1, 2004

This made me think very hard Lori!!

So glad you okay my friend!!

love tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2004

Lori, I know you have a good sense of humor, always use it first and last.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Lori,
it is excellent...........
I also got the chills.........
"A bottle of this, a little of that
Depakote, Seroquil,
Xanax or Restoril,
Washed down with the vodka or gin...
How did I get here, how long has it been
And what is this light that�s been calling me in
Just how did I get here again... again
How did I get here this time..."

Peg

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Lori..lets hope that time never runs out...and that there is always someone watching over those who lose sight. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Ok, this gave me chills, I just lost someone dear to me, and this just got to me, I am glad you worked this out, Powerful and deeply riveting,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

i'm glad you found the resolve to clear your soul ...

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Reminds me of my state of mind during my attempt some years ago. If there's ever a time you want to talk, I'm here to listen.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Lori,

now, please go on, and write about all you have learned...all that makes life worth living. You'll help someone else.

big hugs!
and thanks for the courage to write about this painful topic.

Gina

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Lori, I was so glad to read "last time" Your life is important, otherwise you wouldn't be here
great honest emotions here

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

I know this is just a write..
Great self exspression of someone's demise..

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

I pray that you have the courage to fight off whatever possesses you or drives you to seek taking your life.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

(((lori)))

painful to read, i can't imagine the hurts you must have felt to drive you to such depths of despair

hope you're better now--if you need to talk, message board me (private)

((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :(