The Blanket (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

great poeming, fantastic piece. l&p g

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

This is a truly wise poem...it made me ponder on lifes tranformations...Fletcher B

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

This is so fresh and light, the imagery is so beautiful and your words so insightful~ I love the opening line so perfect in setting the visual scene.
Bright Blessings ,Michelle

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

Good continuity of thought. This is very cleverly done. I liked it very much.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

The changing of the season come to life under your watchful, diligent, literery pen.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

All of this is so excellent the imagery and metaphors Lori!!!!!

BRAVA

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

A very light beautiful imaged piece!!!!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

beautiful work Lori!

Love how you open this........ty, Dani

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Just lovely! Beautiful
expression!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

This was so lovely! excellent poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Snow? In California? You must live in Big Pines or Big Bear.
And such beautiful images. They remind me of Minnesota.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

(((lori)))

this is a beautiful write--enjoyed! love the rhyming scheme and presentation!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

This is so soft and gentle. Made the idea of waking up seem like a very nice thought!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Very nice.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Just plain Beautiful Lori!!

Love & Hugs Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

I agree this is a lovely write...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Helen Bar-Lev (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

simply lovely.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

This is just delightful, Lori, and very appealing. It strikes me as something of a gift to a Childrens' Anthology as it has the timeless quality of the Wonderful World of Disney about it, somehow, and an appeal to children of ALL ages... this child adores it, so full of anticipation, vibrancy and joy! Hugs for this one!! Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

What a delightful poem Lori! I just love it!
You have branched out beautifully with your poetry!Kudo's!

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

L o v e l y. It is rare to see so much said in a few, lovingly chosen words, and I salute you! More!! More!!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Excellent and a very soothing write Poet. Well-done. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Lori, I could almost see the cardinals scratching through the snow, for the slightest morsel..
The rabbit hunkering from the hawk..
Excellent write. Lisa

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

This poem flows poetic and philosophically.

Wonderful, inspiring and touching poem.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Beautiful poem, Lori. I'm glad to be back and read you again. Yes, the blanket will melt and love will return. Love, Alex

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Lovely imagery- This is truly beautiful poetry, Lori!
Such a gentle radiance, a most splendid piece!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Ahh...yes...exactly how I feel about the arrival of Spring!
Nice poem.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

What a beautiful today you built from yesterday. An excellent display of love in your heart. Hugs Bill xx

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Excellent peaceful poem.......

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Hang about I was just reading your last poem, and suddenly you move uptop:))

Morning covers yesterday, then morning becomes today, so true, and gives another chance to move on and up..

Nice mellow poem, delightful..