Jars of Love (4 Haiku) (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

Mmmmm...sounds like a sunny autumn day
Beautiful

Reviewed by Muhammad Ali Panhwar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

Your words create a beautiful scenario. Bravo!

Reviewed on June 26, 2004

Dear Lori,

Haiku, wonderufl treat
so few words so much power
by your verse conveyed

Lori, these are so beautifully written

Warm Hugs
Elga

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on June 24, 2004

These are wonderfully apetizing verses, great Haiku....best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Michelle Smolen

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

These are wonderful Lori, my DearGM used to put up jams.
I love that you put apples and cinnamon first,it grabs the nose and leads you through the words with the memories of the sences ingrained in the brain of childhood. My nose is now longing for those sents WELL DONE!
Blessings rain upon you~ Shell

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on June 2, 2004

yum,
I must say very well done
with my MIL moving here soon, I know she will do some preserves

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

I love making jellies!
Excellent haiku!
You are getting good at this!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Oh what a treat it is to get real instead of all the bio-genetic crap they are trying to sneak onto our shelfs...Great Haiku...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Well prepared delicious delights and wonderful imagery and my taste buds are going wild. Good write Poet. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

tastebuds watering and smelling the aroma wafting about... love these! Dawn

Reviewed by Kerrie Riggs (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Oh I love this, I could almost be there with you! Enjoyed so much.

Kerrie

Reviewed by Sandy Henry

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

So vivid I can see and smell it. Wonderful Haiku...sealed with perfection. sandy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Who needs more than Nature's bounty and grandmother busy in the kitchen?! Ahhh!!!! Suddenly I can bury my head in her apron again and all is well with the world! I WISH!! A fragrant, nostalgic trip into Pooh Bear's larder, I think... for some of us the story book will be as close as we will get to the real thing these days! Harmonious write, Lori! The feel-good factor is here! Thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

A sweet write Lori, I remember some of these type days in grandma'a kitchen. fun piece. l&pG

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Superb haiku treat, Lori. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

This is so lovely, it brought back good memories.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Wonderful, Lori. Brought back many happy childhood memories for me with my beloved grandmother, and her old Mason Jars, crammed to the brim with wondrous delights from her garden.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

This makes me want to make a smoothy fruit drink, with your recipe here, these are all wonderful.
Wonder if you'll get this or if my CPU freezes yet again, and again..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

i luv the aromatic imagery in this poem!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Reminds me of my Grandma making blaackberry cobbler..
Sweet stuff Loria..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Yummy write....geeeesh now i feel like something sweet!!

Great tasty Hi-Q's

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

This brings back so memories for me of my Aunt's kitchen. Wonderful
haikus.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

WONDERFUL write in Haiku!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

a tasty write, suddenly I'm in the mood for a jelly sandwich

joy and starlight
HH

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Lori, these are really grand! What a memory lane trip you took me on here...I remember canning with my grandparents as if it were yesterday...very well done!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Lori this one brought me so many memories of NANA!!!!
Excellent
"apples boiling hot
cinnamon sweeps through the house
Grandmother is home

mason jars in line
canning season has blossomed
treats for tomorrow "

Peg

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Oh I can just smell it all the way down under. My Nana used to do preserves, loved those days.

Excellent Haiku Lori :)
Hugs Ch'erie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 29, 2004

Glad I have some fresh strawberries and peaches, or
I'd be in a huff right now!;-)Love the haiku!Now to
the kitchen;-)lol