Excellent Lori!
Especially the one about God!
You must tell me about Senryu?
What does it contain? I am interested.
Thanks! You inspire me! I have saved this one
in my library!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2004
Oh the last two are sublime, I can't do Haiku that's why I do britiku:)))
Poet, You have a very unique talent and ability to put more meaning within the few lines allotted than most. Outstanding!!! Thank You for sharing these precious writes.
Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2004
Stunning imagery...again your words leave me in awe....thanx for sharing....Peace Abel
Love these Japanese forms, Lori, and you paint such depth with the few syllables and lines permitted. I thought "Walking home from church" was particularly neat!! Very clever play on words and mutual ideas. Lovely! Thank you Kate xx
Enjoyable reading. I like Haiku -- I just don't do it, very well.
Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
WONDERFUL sentiments expressed in these Ku!
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
I enjoyed it, Lori. Continue being yourself. :) That's what it's all about in the end. Everyone is different. But someone always takes over the pulpit and starts shouting. And they talk a lot of nonsense about the higher power. Never accepting responsibility for their own lives. I say--screw the church! Listen to Mary Prankster. :) Have fun, Lori. Don't ever get old. :) Screw the old farts. :) Love, Alex
Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
Lori,
Love all of these! So much said in three little lines! I don't know how one can express any meaning in such few words, ...but you do it very well, Dear Poet!
Cynthia
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
Lori...these are very clever Haiku's...really loved the last one...Fletcher B
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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Especially the one about God!
You must tell me about Senryu?
What does it contain? I am interested.
Thanks! You inspire me! I have saved this one
in my library!
incredibly done
a true spirit here unveils
a soft gentle heart
Take care
Elga
Carmen :-)
Love all of these! So much said in three little lines! I don't know how one can express any meaning in such few words, ...but you do it very well, Dear Poet!
Cynthia
Your also great with this kind of poetry...
and touching God, Are very special;-)Wonderful!