Sun Games (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

You've woven words well here and made me remember why I was so pissed when they razed the woods up the street.

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

I got lost in your spell here, and then trappled by the end, excellent! Made me think of home, where everything once wild and free is constricted now by strip malls and parking lots. Great work, Blessings ~ Shell (saving it too!)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

saving it!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

Really enjoyed this Lori, it made me think. love G

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

Immediately I was taken aback by the beauty of the words; then quickly saddened by the outcome of the meaning. Excellent write!

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

The first verse is so pretty Lori which makes the second verse even sadder!
Wonderful write
Andrea

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

Love the sunny feelings of this one!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

This was just beautiful!

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

Beautiful! Enlightening too!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

You've captured natures beauty well.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

Lori, beautiful imagery. If only there was a way we could bottle that sunshine for the darker moments.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

Excellent expression of nature, Lori.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2004

Love that sunset on the concrete stuff.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

HARDHITTING-->>shadows of the past
rise again.
< < < <EXCELLENT use of symbolism in this poem!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Just a Lovely write of a
poem Lori! Excellent job!
Thank you for my reviews!
Who knew a doctor could
give a shot?!?!?! LOL!!!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Lori...this poem sets the stage for the showdown with men and nature...well written...thoroughly enjoyed...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Excellent imagery, Lori. This is a wonderful piece, thank you.

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

The mysterious elements seem to add a third dimension here, one of ghosts and fog.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Great write, ferns flowers moss, concrete, reminds me of a walk down at san antonio, by the river along past a cafe, I wonder if it's still there, davey crockett ain't, funny old thing memories:))

Or is all that area now a concrete jungle?

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

lovely write! Your subtle message here of the forests decline do to progress is very well done.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Hauntingly Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

The imagery in this is outstanding!Lori you
have been branching out with wondrous poetry!
I'm so glad to see so many different topics
conceived so well!Brava!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Your wonderful talents have struck again and created this outstanding piece of poetry, Poet Lori Moore!!! Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Oh! my friend you have just hit
a very sensitive spot about
our beautiful forest
I see it all the time where I'm at
trees and forest making way for whatever comes
to their minds
excellent write

William