Downhill (4 Haiku) (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

Fasinating Lori!!

Reminded me of the greenfields of England!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Fantastic writing!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

(((lori)))

each haiku stands out on its own merit, but each complements the other to make a brilliant whole--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

You capture the feeling very well. Each haiku is like a snapshot. Excellent, Lori.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Wonderful loved the last one best.. Lorie....

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

I love your haiku's, you do them so well! These were wonderful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

You are very good when it comes to these Haiku�s Poet!!! Although I truly love the great outdoors and the mountains, I haven�t skied in many moons. The last time I went, I forgot to turn� I can go let a bat out of hell downhill, but watch out for those trees� I know� I know� just turn, but, I can�t� (OUCH)!!!�lol. I�d rather stay in the resort and have a nice chilled glass of wine, and wave from the window. Thanks for sharing the downhill memories. (Painful�but they were pleasant too).

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Enjoyed your haiku's, Lori...
You have amazing talent..
I wish I could write these.

~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Wonderful Haikus, Lori; brought back my glorious skiing days.

Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

while going downhill is fun, I hate to have to go up hill first.

Excellent write :)

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Dear Lori,
I wish it would snow here,(Queensland Australia,I never see frozen white sheets here unfortunately!)
Your poem made me feel good .Excellent work.
Best wishes
from
Kay.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

I'm at Heavenly watching them ski, thanks Lori;-)
Wonderful Lori!
(Weather calls for possible snow at tahoe, tomorrow;-)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

WONDERFUL work, Lori!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

Lori...nice work...Fletcher Bailey

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

oh... haven't skied in years. these brought it back. nice work, Lori!