Assorted Haiku and Senyru (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

I admire anyone who can write like this and each and every one you wrote here get my admiration and more...loved them all and my favourite is the lot of them, very well done, take care...Mark x

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Assortment finely written - delightful!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

The summer lie.

What a cast of great images..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Each one is marvelous Lori, I love them all, especially the last two;-)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Lori, this is a lovely set of Haiku's...brilliant...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

i really like the juxtapositioning of images in this poem ...

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Lively images, lovely thoughts!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

The Storm Not Before But After The (Silence) Calm-By Means No Gentle Ripple!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

All poignant, each one has hidden depth. Especially loved the last - controlled power in that particular write. Thank you, Lori. You become this written form very much. Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Excellent Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

loved every last one of 'em, Lori. thanks!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Dear Lori, your poetry is so lovely, but not as lovely as you. Bill

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

These were such lovely haiku's!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Excellent assortment Lori!!! Outstanding!!!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

These are good, Lori -- Last one is my favorite. It kind of jumped at me.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Enjoyed all of these, Lori. My favorite - the same as Kate Clifford's.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Lori I absolutely luved this Haiku and Senyru...pecially the Stanza
" tears fall
the bride awaits his vow
a Summer lie "
Detect a powerful hidden statement here !!

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Enjoyed them all.........(0:

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

You are very good at these.

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Great lines. You have the magic.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

They are all so very beautiful, excellent work! ~Z~