A Few Haiku/Senyru (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 2, 2004

Well-described imageries and feelings.

~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed on July 2, 2004

i'm gonna try one of those one day
enjoyed them all very much the last three the best to me

Reviewed on July 2, 2004

This would make a terrific portrait. But in school, I never got past my love for fingerpaints.

But the fingers that wrote this poem know how to brushstroke some serious thought. Keep on bringing it out for all to view your poetic gallery.

blessin's Lori,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on July 1, 2004

powerful images evoked by so few words...as often, there's elegance in simplicity

Excellent, Lori
Gina

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on June 30, 2004

Wonderful Haiku's - wonderfully composed!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 30, 2004

These read like a beautiful painting, Lori. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 30, 2004

well done

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

Last 3 lines my favorite but of this but all (as always) was top work!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

The Sun Sleeps But So Does You, Humanity Only To Awaken To Your own Created Holy Hell_

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

" a deep cut
a broken relationship
both leave scars"

So true Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

All so true, spec' the last one..

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

Lori, all of these were excellent but I liked the last one the most!!! Thank you for sharing them.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

Excellent! Three and four are my favorites. I can't get the hang of writing Hiku, but I do love to read it.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

nice Lori, hello. you do haiku good. lph G

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

I could never do what you do with these.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

Beautiful and touching Haiku and Senyru
Particulary liked 2 & 4 Lori

Take Care
Peter Paton

Reviewed by DB Prabhu

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

Nice ones...

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

Very cool.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

Dear Lori,

As always you inspire with these.
They are wonderful.

Warm Hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

Love them all, especially 1 3 and 4

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

Oh Lori, these are magical! Each one perfect!
I love the third one, but I love them all;-)!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

all are excellent ... i really like the last one ...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

These were lovely Haikus, I liked this:

water color dreams
brush strokes overlap
blending the sun

Thought that one was just lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2004

You are great at these counselor
I like # 3........
My puters been down and haven't been around..
I'm sick of rain, are you?