A complete kaleidoscope of scenarios and equally as colourful and fascinating, Lori! You have been truly inspired by your Day In The Park and have captured the joys and simplicity of life in a nutshell. Your writing here has a camera's eye. "Just A Perfect Day", as Lou Reed might well say! And you leave us with your upbeat mood, like the upswing in 4. Particularly like 3 & 7. TY Kate xx
A wonderful piece of work. You used so few words and yet told a complete story of many people and things. Poetry at it's best is what I saw here. When I read the words, I saw the park in my mind very vividly.
Sherry
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2004
Loved all 11, so true about the ducks, go without food and..(hmm the day of the killer ducks) they won't leave you alone.
Some are most poignant. Good show..
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
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Reindeer
enjoyed them much
William
on the park bench
a young woman turns a page
men read her fiction
under a tree
a homeless man rests
at home with god
Love the kite and december couple Haikus the best.
Love Tinka
Wonderfully done!
Sick Part Is NOBOBY But NOBODY Believes It Can Will Happen To Them,i.e. I Have Faith In Satan Devil !
Unique N Different!
TRASK
A wonderful piece of work. You used so few words and yet told a complete story of many people and things. Poetry at it's best is what I saw here. When I read the words, I saw the park in my mind very vividly.
Sherry
Some are most poignant. Good show..
Particulary 4. 6. 7. 8. Haikus
Peter