Five Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sara Russell

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

An enjoyable read... I like the fourth one best of all!

Sara

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

you know I love haiku :)

the picnic one made me laugh

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

the first is simply outstanding

j+

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Lunch In The Park would amplify the great 12 or so you posted a few days ago, all on your "Day At The Park" theme. You have a knack of matching the tranquility and stillness of haiku to your mood - or the other way round, probably! You excel in this style. Ty Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Outstanding Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Lori -

A finely crafted haiku - kudos!

Robert

Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Good images. I especially enjoyed the one about the silent lake. Well done.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Exceptionally well-written work, Lori!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

You are as good with these as you are the political ones.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Well penned Lori

William

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

You are very good at these...I liked the fourth one, partial to cats..lol...they are all very good.

Amy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

I loved your last Haiku the most. (swan)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

This paints summertime ... visually beautiful

Gina

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

I love them all especially the last one!;-)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Lori Great haikus, Fletcher B

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Great Haiku Lori..you are so good at them and a natural...
particulary drawn to " on the sidewalk
beneath the midday sun
an ant expressway "....very depictive....

Love
Peter

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Simply ok as in awesome......

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Very nice indeed, hmm sidewalk = pavement?

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

unrelated but all beautiful

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

As Long As You Keep It Beauty In Your Own Mind There Is Hope For You Yourself!

Unique N Different!

TRASK