Seven Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

nicely done
my youngest daughter was born on a Firday the 13th :)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Hey Lori. Today is my birthday. Your haiku (lovely and meaningful as they are) mean that much more. I guess to me, it's not just another day. But actually; you are right. It is. Thank you so much for sharing your talent (and soul) with us. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

These are such lovely haiku's, Lorie...
Most beautiful creativity!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

This is the one I liked best :-)

"he trims her heart
to keep it manageable
like a bonsai "

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Lori...enjoyed your haikus...cheers....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Had to laugh with the dag and cat one, very clever. J.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Another Powerful 7, on Friday, the 13th!

Enjoyed them all, Lori.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Lori, you are a very gifted Poet! Thank you for sharing your talent. Outstanding work! I only had one question the one about the dog one, I thought all Haiku�s are 5-7-5? I don�t know though, and I�m not the brightest bulb on the tree...lol! Nevertheless Poet, I do know you are extremely talented and gifted human being! Thanks again for sharing it.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Dear Lori,

Beautiful creative Haiku, once again well done.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

I enjoyed each line of this. You have mastered this so well.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Each one is entire. Your creativity is unique in subject, content and movement.
Susan

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Special to read.....Thanks Lori!
Have a sweet day.......

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Oh yeah friday 13th, my lucky day, alonge with 14th 15th, 16,etc

I sure can see you love doing these.

Very enjoyable gems too...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Wonderful Haiku's.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

very cool, especially the third stanza

serenity and starlight
HH

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Lori,
Your haikus are always good!
So few words with such perfect imagery.

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Splendid write Lori!!

L:ove Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Perfection

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Verbal photography of the classiest, sharpest images, Lori. Especially loved "he trims his heart" and "friday the 13th" haikus. I admire your collage-world very much - beautiful and poignant! TY Kate xx