The Other (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

A powerful piece, Lori, and I know this torment haunts many a second love.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

These lasting loves can prove problematic down the road.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Looks like it�s still breathing to me, Poet! Excellent poetry!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Very nice, Lori

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Mine has been dead for years___

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Wonderful write!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

sometimes we just have to jumpstart it back into motion ...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Sad, but wonderful write......

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Poetry is never not alive, Lori. The only way it can die is if you lose your love for it. And I don't think that will ever happen.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Dear Lori,

How long indeed !!! isn't it
so sad that one has to wait,
such revelation in this poem.

Wonderful write Lori.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Yeh Lori a very touching and moving poem of the highest and most sublime degree....
Entrancing ....
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Oh Lori! This is so touchingly beautiful!
You manage to convey so much in your words!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Lori, I'm with Sherry on this one. If your man isn't ready to move forward with you and only wants to remain anchored in the past, life is SHORT...kick him to the curb!!! This is a poignant, yet heart wrenching write. Well done. Michelle

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

The emotion drips from the heart in this sad write

Reviewed by Cheryl Kaye Tardif

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Poignant and touching!

(You shouldn't have to "wait" at all!)
CKT

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

(((o, lori)))

this is beautiful, yet incredibly painful--that last stanza ohhhhhhhhhh took my breath away

*tears*

i hope not long

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

This is one incredible write, oh my, this says so much Lori, conveys so much emotion.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Powerful longing in this one Lori!!

Love your work!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Sounds Like Superficial Love,i.e. Whence You Sit In Silence Poetry Comes Alive Without Tryen Your Hand Will Write With Out a F(r)ight!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

I can relate very much to this poem.

Very expresive poem..

Can feel the longing..