Six Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Lori, these haiku's just get better and better...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on August 18, 2004

Love the last one :)

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 18, 2004

Lori,

Grand haiku write - wonderful!

Robert

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 18, 2004

slow-rising sun
the old oak once again
casts a shadow

beneath the willow
in a small burrow
field mice hide

Very deep and quite meaningful. This is a masterpiece.
Thanks Lori

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Love one and five- great work.

Reviewed by Jo Janoski

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Love your haiku, especially the first one. The second was fun!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Lori, I always love to read your haiku. I like 1 and 3.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

(((lori)))

beautifully presented and written! well done!

haiku are challenging, are they not? i love to see what i can say in as few words as possible--great challenge to the mind

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Verses 1 and 5 are my favorites. Something about haiku brings out the best of our poetic essence. I wasn't sure you could get better than you were, but you did. Keep those haiku a'comin.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Dear Lori

You have truly mastered this literary art form. My favourite is number four. Thank you Lori.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Lori,

Life isn't always a pleasure but your poetry is. Nice write and a bit deeper than one first suspects.

Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

You are truly The Haiku Poetess - all marvelous - again!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

From wind dances to bird phoop to pleasure???

Excellent nature write... sounds like a walk on the beach....to me...freeeeeeeee.....as the wind in my hair....hehehehe!!

Excellent Lori !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Within your haiku's
Dwells a well organized mind
Full of imagery

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Wonderful Haiku Lori!!!!!! Third my favorite.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Ahhh nature.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

These were lovely haiku! Beautifully written Lori,

Reindeer