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Six More Haiku
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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catch the moment
running through my fingers
like a shooting star

delayed by clouds
the sunrise sneaks a shadow
defying the darkness

a jet
seems to crawl
so far away

never satisfied
the blue planet continues
its progress

a god
created in man’s image
disappoints

memories
like reflections on a lake
blur

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 Reviews of "Six More Haiku"
Reviewed on August 21, 2004
Wonderful imageries and poem.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
These are wonderful, Lori!!!
I especially like the verse before the last one.
How profound!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
Excellent Haiku!
You are getting really good!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
These are all "oooh!" and "aaahhh!" like the gentle starbursts of the soul they portray, Lori! They sparkle and shine - particularly, for me, 1, 5 and 6; seems sacrilege to number them in such a harsh way, by the way! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
a jet
seems to crawl
so far away

I have alway thought this too.

Great Ku.

Hope for Moore Ku

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
You might as well have called these six more gems. How the BLEEP do you DO that?

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
Lori, #5 is one of the best haiku I've read (except for the so-called "masters"). Love them all, of course. Dawn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
Soul write Lori!!

I mean Haiku's!!

Excellent!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
Excellent work Lori but so very sad. Your work is outstanding as always!

Sherry

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
I'm with you

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
Loved 1, 2 and 5. You are getting really good at these. :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
each haiku is a segment building to a very poignant statement on the present nature of mankind's dilema ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
Lori, Your haiku are always so meaningful! Outstanding
thoughts!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
Sweet
I particulary am fonf of five and six Lori..
Love
Peter

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
saving this!!!
um
these!!!
beautiful...........beautiful.......BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! PAX .A

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
yest and deed
well penned ...Lorie
love Haiku
will get around to posting mine soon

William

Reviewed on August 18, 2004
Little soul searching? Nice


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