A Morning Snow (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Lori, these verses would make great haikus, the images are amazing...great poetry, Fletcher B

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

Dear Lori,

Almost tangible imagery, and a super write.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

This one tells of the life cycle, in search of the reborn. This poem can be read in more than one way.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

To me, this is wonderfully symbolic of life and I think you have done a wonderful job of putting the meaning across. Thank you, Lori. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

Or dies, depending on your outlook. You are beauty.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

captures winter's spirit and beauty

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

Excellent poetry Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

Lori, this is the best imagery to describe beauty. But in some ways it reminds me of how my mind is cold sometimes, unable to give any word to write until it bolts with the touch of the literary sun. Excellent poetry.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

It is beautiful when writers block is faded.
me thinks. ;) Great write!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Lovely and visual...with a message of hope for relief to come

Gina

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

the imagery is just excellent ...

"Bowing to the earth
branches sense the heaviness of responsibility" are my favorite lines ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Gorgeous write Lori! maybe we all need a touch of WB;-)

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

No writer block with this write here. put me right there watching this winter sight of beauty,
Tommy

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

this is beautiful
love the way you describe
your thoughts
excellent write

William

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

I like this part the best

"As morning fades
a touch of sun melts the burdens
forming puddles on the ground "

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

I know it's not popular to like winter, but I really appreciate it's beauty. This is lovely Lori. Michelle

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Once You Live In Snow 30 Below Zero Snow Country You Never Get Over It Melting Away Always Comes Back In Your Mind!

Go Into Silence You Won't Have Writers Cramps!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

I know where urcoming from, my latest is out of my first ever writters block, but i think it is due to the stress of court on 25th, for my son. So one writes well within themselves.

But this is snow joke, hope not to see snow for the 20th yr..Except if i go to yanky doodle land..These flash floods are enough..

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Beauty is born of this poem as well as the subject matter, but where do you live that the snow has already started...I am just getting used to the heat of summer, lets not talk of snow, shall we...LOL?
Peaceful thoughts to you,Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

This is so lovely Lori, like purity of drifting snow.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

An exceptional write, Lori!
Delete all the apology that precedes it. This poem needs
no apologies. It is top drawer!

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Those melting mornings--treasure them!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

I agree with Sherry and George below ...
This is perfection...
Peter

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Lori, this is an excellent write. We are always are own worse critics.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

A beauty!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

(((lori)))

don't give up--this is a grand beginning. if you get stuck, put it aside until the rest of it comes to you. but i don't see why you should add to it--it's perfect!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

I like what Sherry says and I think she is wise