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Two Short Poems
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Dandy lions
never roar out loud.

Still, their cry is clearly understood
as the perfect lawn
surrenders.

___________________________


Lovers part
leaving words unspoken.

An ice cold breeze
offers a kiss
to her frozen cheek,
melting the residue of his touch.

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 Reviews of "Two Short Poems"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
This is a mini movie.......my imagination went PLACES!!!

this style is so well done by you.........
u say so much.......with so little effort......because what you have dear one is ART!!!

never lose it, don't let life, distract you from your talent......
and if it does......listen when it call you back
:)
Anita

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Lori, well done...very unique and clever.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
clever!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Lovely work, Lori

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
I love the creativity here Lori! Kudo's
for two clever unique poems!

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Intriguing poems that make one think!

Andrea

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
both very cleverly crafted ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Memoriess vs Surrender To Myself!

TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Splendid Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 28, 2004
super stuff, lor! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Jaysus, Lori... this is the stuff that just collapses me. The cleverness of thought and the brevity, packed to the brim with creative voice, makes these gems something that gives pause. We read a lot here, now and then truly absorbing, even wishing we'd written it ourselves, it's that good. That would describe my visit to this page. These two pieces are great! katy xox.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Uniquely crafted and packed with deeper meaning, Lori. Great stuff! Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Gorgeous, clever work Lori! Your poetry is lovely......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Great imagery...In short...profound write...BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
My favorite is #1...but both are splendid examples of
expressing deep poetic thought in but a few words.
Kudos!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
The orginality of the first one is outstanding! The coolness of romance in the second one is great. You have shared some very talented writing here.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Lori...A double whammy of class and skill...
Both are beauties...
Love
Peter

Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Around here I call them Damndylions. Poem two leaves a sad visual.
Well Done

Phil

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
The first one is my favorite, it cost a fortune to keep dandylions at bay.

Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Great poems, well-expressed.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Oh my gosh, you were truly inspired here - these are both excellent, Lori! I love both of these. Wow.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
So different - both extremely good!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Great imagery with metaphors

Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Very impressive thoughts... I learned from the two poems.

The first one has an imagery of its own and the second - is no second, - but a follow up of a symbolistical and poetic grandiose.


I salute You, Sublime Artist of the VERB!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Both are exquisite Lori. My lawn can certainly relate!

Lisa


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