Very well done. I love poems about nature!! Your picture is very nice too. Take care--Penni Weston
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
I am overwhelmed. Oh. Can't use "I." In that case, "I" am not for it. Oh, by the way, "I" believe that life derserves a place, too. Does that make me less a sub-human to you? No? Drat.
Any interaction with Nature is one of beauty and reverence; a well thought out poem, one I will keep in my library for later reflection...KeePeace, Ed & Rufuz
The way your words strip the 'ulgies' out of the world and replace them with all of natures wonders and beauties just astounds me! What wonderful work you have done with this one. The world can be beautiful we just have to stop and look for it at times.
Sherry
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Wonderful insperational write.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Lori this is such a lovely poem, a joy to read. Your thoughts dig deep.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Lori, I enjoyed the journey and read. Thank you for sharing it. Take care.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
Wonderful nuances, well written Lori.
Warm hugs
Elga
Prepares For The Beginning Not The End,i.e. BE READY to CONQUER_
Unique N Differnt Done Good Write!
TRASK
;)
ty, truly, Dani
Do I smell a subtle Whitman influence? Or perhaps it's Thoreau?
"The survivors who reach the sky,
and their seed, dying to be born,
asleep beneath the blanket of untouched soil."
Touching silence.
Lisa
The way your words strip the 'ulgies' out of the world and replace them with all of natures wonders and beauties just astounds me! What wonderful work you have done with this one. The world can be beautiful we just have to stop and look for it at times.
Sherry
With an air of expectancy and hope..
Love
Peter
Carmen :-)
she prepares…" - enjoyed this creation.
Amy
Love Tinka
ethereal place that ends in hope...lovely Lori