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Nature Walk
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I wade through the stillness of a summer path,
each step seeded with the innocence of life.
An innocence not fully mine, yet shared.

I move in reverence
among the elders and those who deserve to be.

The survivors who reach the sky,
and their seed, dying to be born,
asleep beneath the blanket of untouched soil.

Possibilities surround me…

In awe, I continue.
My presence is all that disrupts
the silence of this place.

Nature welcomes my exploration,
with a display of life never touched by art.

With hope, she waits once more, seeking an ally
willing to share, not conquer.

An ally willing to lose the “I”
and believe that life deserves a place.

Awaiting an answer,
she prepares…

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 Reviews of "Nature Walk"
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Very well done. I love poems about nature!! Your picture is very nice too. Take care--Penni Weston

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
I am overwhelmed. Oh. Can't use "I." In that case, "I" am not for it. Oh, by the way, "I" believe that life derserves a place, too. Does that make me less a sub-human to you? No? Drat.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Dear Lori,

Wonderful nuances, well written Lori.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Awaiting An Answer That Never Comes_

Prepares For The Beginning Not The End,i.e. BE READY to CONQUER_

Unique N Differnt Done Good Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Your always tops........

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Beautiful write.....you capture a whole lot in this poem....Gifted girl!

;)

ty, truly, Dani

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
beautiful walk and poem

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
This is very good writing.

Do I smell a subtle Whitman influence? Or perhaps it's Thoreau?

"The survivors who reach the sky,
and their seed, dying to be born,
asleep beneath the blanket of untouched soil."

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Any interaction with Nature is one of beauty and reverence; a well thought out poem, one I will keep in my library for later reflection...KeePeace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
You walk not alone Lori. Beautifully penned.
Touching silence.

Lisa

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Lori,

The way your words strip the 'ulgies' out of the world and replace them with all of natures wonders and beauties just astounds me! What wonderful work you have done with this one. The world can be beautiful we just have to stop and look for it at times.

Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Wonderful insperational write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Lori this is such a lovely poem, a joy to read. Your thoughts dig deep.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Lori, I enjoyed the journey and read. Thank you for sharing it. Take care.

Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Smooth, and full of thought. Well done

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Simply gorgeous Lori...
With an air of expectancy and hope..
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Wonderful concept. Well developed poem. Enjoyed reading it.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Your poem is a beacon of light on a storm tossed world.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
The I's have it!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
subtly enriched perspective ... no doubt, you have many allies ...

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Clearly intent sent forth and "Awaiting an answer,
she prepares…" - enjoyed this creation.

Amy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Just beautifully written Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Lori, beautifully written. The message is powerful...Fletcher B

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
A haunting poem with beautiful images. A mystical
ethereal place that ends in hope...lovely Lori

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Exceptional piece, Lori. It unfolds with grace and leaves the reader pondering what answer he/she shall give. Dawn


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