you're in a deep place, huh? this was nice - got me thinking about the upside / downside of delving into past and future and about the pricelessness of the moment
Next time you dream, see what you can dig up on Shakespeare.
It is an interesting question you ask. It makes me think if there is another side of us: the one that dreams, because sometimes dreams can be far fetched and nothing we would venture into in our consciousness. I liked this poem very much, Lori; it left me thinking... and that could be dangerous.
Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
Lori, an excellent thought-provoking composition, Poet. In life, I’ve found that one should never read between the lines, and one must be willing and able though to look beyond the moment in cheerful expectation to fulfill the sacred quest of one’s life. Thanks for sharing it. Take care.
Not knowing, but knowing enough to know
nothing, I seek an answer.
A truly perplexing part of human life - and I find myself doing this all the time - it truly can be quite frustrating - but we all keep muddling on somehow.
Lori, if we never read between the lines?, we'd never clearly see anything!
I loved this!
Lisa
Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
An issue everyone asks at some point in their lives Lori, you will find the answer, life is full of reading between the lines.
A thoughtful piece,
Reg.
your questions are only the beginning. I always seek what is between the lines of great authors.very nice poem......i am sure there will be more to this
I love this Lori! Having felt the same I can relate;-)
However, I think you misread your dreams,you are a very
potent part of each moment!!! Great poem!
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Vesna :)
Very profound, and I do believe there is an upside !!
Great write.
Warm hugs
Elga
It is an interesting question you ask. It makes me think if there is another side of us: the one that dreams, because sometimes dreams can be far fetched and nothing we would venture into in our consciousness. I liked this poem very much, Lori; it left me thinking... and that could be dangerous.
Carmen :-)
nothing, I seek an answer.
A truly perplexing part of human life - and I find myself doing this all the time - it truly can be quite frustrating - but we all keep muddling on somehow.
An extremely powerful piece, Lori.
"Is there a voice besides my own?
A voice besides the voice that speaks
to my psychotic norm…"
Psychotic norm...
I loved this!
Lisa
A thoughtful piece,
Reg.
Ps: Men surely do have the Up and Downssssss...lol!!
Love Tinka
- Once a dream is beyond the atmosphere, the answer could be, "metamorphosis or metenpsychosis".
"Dream Side" delivers an intriguing question and serves a flavored poetic meal.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
an excellent query into beingness ...
Love
Peter
However, I think you misread your dreams,you are a very
potent part of each moment!!! Great poem!
lots to ponder.........
interesting questions..........
unfinished?