Senyru & Haiku - A Set (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 29, 2004

wow! so many images rush though my head! piercing

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Dear Lori,

Super Ku's as always, all of them great but my favourite must be the last one. Great write.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

(((lori)))

you are a master 'kuist :) i liked all of them, but # 2 really made me smile :) AIN'T IT THE TRUTH LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

I really like this whole set, Lori. But I do especially like 2 and 3. Thanks for the smile.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

They are all great, Lori, but my favorite is the last.
Fine work, poet!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Another fabulous Box Set from your Senyru/Haiku Pen, Lori. Think I like the woodpecker best.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

These really are quite something.

The woodpecker one, reminds me of the bloke annoyed at a woodpecker, by his house, threw a large stone, missed the bird, but hit his new car...

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

Lori, dynamite Senyru, Haiku’s equals a great big Thank You Poet! I loved them all. Stunning work. P.S. Poet, don’t tell anybody, but I really enjoy number 4, that’s what I use for my alarm clock. Never have to worry about the electricity going out in the middle of the night. Thanks Lori for sharing your brilliant work. Have an easy day.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

A feast has been set before me, and I devoured all of it.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Excellent.... I love the shower one most!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Really loved #2 and #5, Lori. Well said indeed.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

great writes all
love haiku
enjoyed much

William ....love & peace

Reviewed by jeanne watson

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Love these. . . I've written one haiku. . . every time I try I'm stuck ....and end up scratching it all out. . . these just seem to flow so naturally. . . just the right words to capture the essence of the moment. . . truely a gift........

jeanne

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

all great, Lori. like the humor in 2 & 3!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Great Haiku's.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

really like the last one ...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Lovely work

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Deep insightful gut touching write.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

I agree with all the others. You're becoming a master

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Two and five do it for me , Lori...
Peter

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

you are so good at these
what i like about the way you do them is........
YOU MAKE SENSE!!!
its not a few words put together that you have to pick thru to find the meanng..........
Your short lines.....are so very complete and intelligent, and make me say........
aha!
lol
aha......is a good thing!

wonderful!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

Neat! First and third are my favorites. :-)

Carmen :-)