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Tax Game
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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A playful political commentary...

You make far more than your fair share.
We値l tax you here, we値l tax you there.
You own a home, you have money to spare.
We値l tax you here, we値l tax you there.

Your father left his wealth behind.
We値l tax you here, we値l tax you there.
Inheriting wealth is such a crime.
We値l tax you here, we値l tax you there.

Everyone should receive the same,
in this womb to the tomb socialist game.
We値l redistribute your wealth and remove your shame.
We値l tax you here, we値l tax you there.

Our entitlement plans will level the field
We値l change the rules to increase your yield.
Though you earn a D, we値l give you an A,
and only the wealthy will have to pay�

Our programs are grand, they池e one of a kind.
We値l leave this selfish society behind.
We値l watch as you stand in the entitlement line,
then we値l tax you here, we値l tax you there.

We値l end class envy, the answer is clear
We値l offer you plans that Marx would hold dear
In our homogenous society, all will cheer
We値l tax you here, we値l tax you there�




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 Reviews of "Tax Game"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
A certain sarcasm here. Disenfranchised masses are the source of most terrorism and crime. Guys like George Bush, not the brightest bulb, have thrived on entitlements [wealthy supporting the wealthy] most of their lives. The current methods of taxation and entitlements are clearly unfair. All or nothing. You qualify or you don't. Nixon had it right. A workfare where each one worked to their ability and were subsidized to an income above poverty. The rich do not need excess to live well. They should share their good fortune. Bill Gates, as ruthless and monopolistic as he is, believes that an inheritance tax is good.

Reviewed on September 10, 2004
(((lori)))

LOL--ain't it the truth!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
a very clever and taxing poem ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Amen. To Kate, ^#!.*)(^!

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Woo. Send this one to the IRS.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
I Hope You Have A Will,i.e. YOU DIE STATE LEGALLY CONFINSCATES Everything You Own & Even Puts Your (Homeless)Children (In Foster Homes)Until Up For Adoption_

HEED!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
OK then, putting cards on the table, what would be deemed to be "fair", but at the same time to redistribute the wealth so that the "fat cats" were still suitably comfortable and yet put pennies in the pot so that others might be at least living above the poverty line? And which Administration would you most trust to deliver these sorts of goods and promises?! Stir, stir!!!!! Here in the UK, because we earn over a certain threshhold we are taxed at 40% - do I have any takers for that?! Still our health system is creaking along with education and anything that is basically state-funded for the benefit of all. However, if I could be sure that my taxes WERE actually helping towards building a better standard of living for everyone, then I would consider my high rate of taxation worth it. Who needs to change their car every few months, anyway, when people are going without food and heat? That seems to be what it boils down to here in Good ol GB at any rate - but I'm just ignorant about US so I'd better just zipper up! Provocative write, Lori, and one that is dear and close to all our hearts!! It's good to have a light-hearted look at such issues! You are never one to shirk the tough stuff - good for you; you'll be a credit to your legal system... Congratulations!! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Dear Lori,

Great write, but believe me, it's no different here in S.A. they tax us here they tax us there and they tax us EVERYWHERE!!

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Our country is a Union, an experiment in community, where we all chip in our fair amount and then make sure our government spends our dues wisely. It's not strange to me to see people trying to defeat unions at the same time they do not want to pay any taxes for our shared union, The United States. Selfish interests run our country now, and paying dues is anathema. It's a mindset promulgated by the right wing.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
taxes??? the no good whatchamacallits! I'll stop there.
Good poem, Lori

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
It's the same thing here, Lori. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Now that you're
a full fledged lawyeress (Congratulations by the way)
sharpen your nails
develop your tigress
instincts
and tax the tigers

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Love the parody Lori! You are so witty with your
political satire, you should do "Moore" of it;-)

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Yes, I had almost forgotten this aspect of the Democratic party. Thanks for the reminder. ~ Sara

Reviewed on September 6, 2004
I like this one! Bravo.

Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Ha ha..so true! Excellent poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Redistribution of wealth, for the betterment of the majority. Sounds like something that the former Soviet Union found did not work so well.

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Yes don't we all love the tax man, NOT!!!Cute write on a dicey subject. Enjoyed...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
There is one political party that this reminds me of and it's not the one I will cast my vote for. Love it.

Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Don't I know this. I'm paying so much tax it wasn't funny. It used to be great receiving our pay cheque, not anymore.

It is more so in Canada.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Quite a game, indeed, and it has been for a very long time.

PS You will be receiving an Anti-Tax Tax Notice for posting this poem.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Its soul destroying when all your earnings seem to get overtaxed...takes away the incentive to work harder or do overtime...
We are all in the same boat sadly....Lori
Sympathise...
Peter

Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Great pen Lori,
It would be nice of congress to at least pass a bill making all taxes a Direction tax. Then you could put your money where it was needed most.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Lori, I feel ya...you should come to Hong Kong, we only get taxed 17%...still I guess these politicians need hiogh taxes to justify all their highly charged expense accounts...bless their souls...you should be this great poem to music...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Lori, your frustrations are clearly heard. They always figure out a way to get it, and if they can't do it with the old laws they'll change them til they get the last dime!
Good rant Lori!

Lisa


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