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The Spin
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This came after viewing "The Journey," by Rassouli.




Out of the darkness...
turning, turning, and again,
like a whirlpool
causing my world to spin.

A reverse action. A rotation,
divinely inspired
by latent instinctual energies.

Inner balance is lost.
My sense of direction spent.

Points of reference disappear,
like stars in a cloud filled sky.

Ancient thoughts are new.
Loosed, from the confines of
an archetypal boundary.

Light… an explosive spectrum of color
overtakes my imagination.

Revelation rips away my
self imposed limitations.

Colors, existing solely within
the soul of a seeker...
Real, simply because they are...
surround me.

Motion is born,
challenging my reality.

For the first time,
I see that which has always been.

A universal coming of age...

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 Reviews of "The Spin"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
Admirable exploration in ekphrasis, Lori.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
i luv how you imagination flows, comes into being and offers such an insightful poem ....

Reviewed on September 7, 2004
I enjoy your ability to take one up the different paths of your mind. well done

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Lori, a very prolific write, quite inspiring actually...it makes me the reader want to be a better person...excellent creativity...Fletcher B

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Beautifully captured metaphysical shift! Very nice, Lori.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Revelation rips away my
self imposed limitations.

fantastic writing, Lori. i especially love poetry inspired by art and vice versa. Dawn

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Pray End You Aren't In Spin To Holy Hell,i.e. Reality!!

TRASK

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
oh yessssssssssssss

Ancient thoughts are new.
Loosed, from the confines of
an archetypal boundary.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
mesmerizing. Well written

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Great ekphrastic poem..

Reviewed by Steve Joos
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Interesting work,

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Dear Lori

Beautifully written, those glorious spins and colours awaken the soul, heart and mind and we grow.

arm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Lori I'm caught in your spin loving the spin your in
under that old golden magic called knowing!;-) Fantastic
awareness beautifully composed!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
We're on a spin right Lori? ;) This is a
great piece. I enjoyed it.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Insightful spin of thoughts. Great write.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
It happens with age Lori, but don't worry...you aren't there alone!
Well done!

Lisa

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Lori,
Outstanding write. Always face reality head on.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Comes a time Lori...when everything just starts slotting into place...The Dawning of Self Awareness..
Peter

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
Great insight brought to bear in this wonderful poem

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
I used to spin round and round....then falling down on the ground I would stare up at the clouds. I digress.


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