...We are never alone - whether we want to be or not! We live somehow in the thoughts and minds of others... myriad ideas that weave their beauty with their brevity. Especially like "Background noise - after the argument Your lips move" - brilliant! TY Kate xx
High impact, powerfully emotive.
Still, I chuckled at this one:
background noise-
after the argument
your lips move
That's one really in the moment, Lori.
there is something magical that occurs when i read your haiku and senryu. stripped down to bare essence, your talent shines! these are exceptional in meaning and beauty. BRAVA!
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
Love Tinka
and your haiku is art
William ...peace
'my mind
a constant mirror-
reflecting his image '
(you do these so well Lori)
Best wishes aways
from
kay
Andrea
Very touching and incredibly well penned,
they are all great, but my favourites are
numbers 5 and 6, thank you for sharing these.
warm hugs
Elga
Still, I chuckled at this one:
background noise-
after the argument
your lips move
That's one really in the moment, Lori.
Nordette
YOu have the gift!;-)
TRASK
there is something magical that occurs when i read your haiku and senryu. stripped down to bare essence, your talent shines! these are exceptional in meaning and beauty. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Tinged with sadness...
Peter