Donni-Jay said to look at your site Lori. I agree with her that you are very pretty, but I am at a loss to understand your poem. Sorry, I am new to poems! But, I shall come back and read some articles and stories.
Blessings, Rev Davey
I think that some people best beat their lips together to keep the circulation in a stale room moving so they don't put themselves to sleep with their own empty chatter.
Great "p" sounds . . . pompous, panorama, parallel, give this poem it's "punch!"
blessin's, great satire in verse my Sistah,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Superb write Lori! Some are absorbed beyond the ability
to be of any use to anyone but themselves. Almost to the
point of narcissum. A lot of that around today!
"Another pompous academic making love
to her own view…"
I love it, I most certainly know some like this, one is a poet and a poetry professor who professes that no one is as perfect as she, the old crow...LOL!
She will die alone, without family nor friends, a shame, but it is the way she has brought it on herself...by the way, a poem herein and not a Haiku, and a very wonderful poem it is...Peace, ed & rufuz
Lori...She ain't like me...Lol
For a start..she is a different sex.....grin.....and secondly I prefer to be adaptable and outward looking...
Intriguing and amusing poem...
Peter
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Blessings, Rev Davey
pompous academic making love
to her own view…
Have known quite a few of these in my time; have also known quite a few bureaucrats and politicians who do the same.
Excellent write, I pity those
that are so self absorbed, for
I feel they miss the best in life.
Thanks for sharing.
warm hugs
Elga
spot on! wisdom beneath your lines--awesome write!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Great "p" sounds . . . pompous, panorama, parallel, give this poem it's "punch!"
blessin's, great satire in verse my Sistah,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Love Tinka
to be of any use to anyone but themselves. Almost to the
point of narcissum. A lot of that around today!
Well I'm a girl.....and I have been known to look in the mirror occasionally ..lol
Seriously though Lori! This is great writing....good to read you....
ty, Dani
to her own view…"
I love it, I most certainly know some like this, one is a poet and a poetry professor who professes that no one is as perfect as she, the old crow...LOL!
She will die alone, without family nor friends, a shame, but it is the way she has brought it on herself...by the way, a poem herein and not a Haiku, and a very wonderful poem it is...Peace, ed & rufuz
For a start..she is a different sex.....grin.....and secondly I prefer to be adaptable and outward looking...
Intriguing and amusing poem...
Peter