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A Set of Five Haiku
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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her mercedes-
men and pigeons
take aim

fallen petals
yesterday’s starlet
beauty fades

fish market
miles away-
in the wind

stray thoughts-
fluttering moths
find the light

a tiny dog
chases his tail
and my dreams

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 Reviews of "A Set of Five Haiku"
Reviewed by robin buehler
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
nice images here and double meanings

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Dear Lori,

As always beautifully done and very descriptive. Thank you for sharing.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed on September 17, 2004
(((lori)))

'ku queen, that's you

visual masterpieces, damn fine storytelling in so few words BRAVA!

((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Just Beautiful! Excellent ku!
You are soooo good at this!
Becca

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Ejoyed all of them, each told a story in so few words.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Lori these are all brilliant.



her mercedes-
men and pigeons
take aim

Priceless..

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Lori, you are a natural at this form of the arts. Each of them were perfect and I really tried to choose a favorite but just couldn't do it.
Great work!

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
hahahahahaha.... Auch this is me,,,,hehehehe

"a tiny dog
chases his tail
and my dreams"

Auch..lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
you do a profound justice to the artform ...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
Glorious interweaving of evocative thoughts and feelings with beautiful cameo pictures. The first is priceless! You really hit that golden-ku spot in all of us, Lori. All your work is A*, but somehow you seem so effortless and natural in this form. Very well achieved, as always. Thank you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
You will always be beautiful to me, your poetry flows like the breath of an Angel.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
I love your collections of haiku
keep them coming

William ......Peace

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
All fantastic. You've got a true gift for these, girl.
Nordette

Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Lori,

I highly recommend for you to submit to.... http://simplyhaiku.com/

Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
these are all so wonderful. I love the feeling I got from reading them. a little sad and pensive

Reviewed on September 16, 2004
The Queen of Ku's has once again given me more reason to wonder. How one can say so much in so few words. I cold write thirty lines to only come close to what she says in thirty-six words. Amazed

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Lori more excellent haiku's

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
I just love Haikus...so much to say in so few words!!! I enjoyed yours very much.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
All are wise sayings

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Enjoyed all :-)

This one is a powerful write within such few words!

"fallen petals
yesterday’s starlet
beauty fades"

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Hee, hee, love the first one..
Thanks for your comments, a bunches....

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
They are all goodies , Lori
Especially " a tiny dog
chases his tail
and my dreams "
Peter

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
LOLOL
you are the best at these........they actually say something!
when i do it......they are full of inenuendos (sp?) your shoot from the hip!
lolol
love it!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Good work, Lori. Love the first one. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Lori nobody ku's like you;-)! I love the whimsy in these!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Lori, you're a master at haiku...these are funny, insightful, entertaining, evocative...love them all...and the 'fishy one' made me laugh

thanks
Gina


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