Summer Rain (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Whoa. Excellent piece, Lori. Thank you.

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on September 21, 2004

Can relate to this.
Very well expressed.
Hope you are okay by now.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on September 21, 2004

This is heartfelt and tears do wash
away the pain, I think. Great write!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 21, 2004

They never help and are over rated.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on September 21, 2004

made me think Lori, lets see, we cry, tears fall but what we're crying over stays in our brain. so we end up crying again later on over the same thing sometimes. l&p G

Reviewed by Tamara Dailey-Keur (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

This is beautiful. You are truly blessed with the gift of words.

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

my this is lovely!

love&light,
**Mari**

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

a wonderful piece
excellent write

William ....peace

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Exellently coveyed...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Hi Lori:

Wonderful write!...very creative indeed. This poem can be read in more than one way. Thank you for sharing!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

i loved this....the imagery is wonderfully done...good poesy!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Very insightful write!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Lori, you write with a mountain of energetic passion. It's takes great talent to not only be aware you possess it, but then to be able to make it mobile from the page to the reader.
Perfectly awesome poetry.

Lisa

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Beautifully written, this was excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

AWESOMELY POWERFUL! You have struck gold with this deceptively gentle, summer-rain write, Lori, when underneath the blood boils... I don't think anyone will forget your potent metaphor in the lines: "I cry - an allergic reaction to your pollinated lies"...(oops, typo 3rd-4th line!!). Just EXCELLENT! Wish I wrote is, as Anita might say! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

You captured my emotions in very few lines. Thans lori

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero