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Haiku & Senryu
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"Essence is more important than form." - Shiki



lost Gulls
eat crumbs and fries-
in a sea of cars

where hills once stood
a lone coyote runs-
house to house

walking alone-
a lost child
finds fear

searching for answers-
a lonely wife
becomes a bride

hands
reaching for peace-
shadows
  

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 Reviews of "Haiku & Senryu"
Reviewed by robin buehler
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
nice. i especially like the last one

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
absolutely grand, Lori...all are exceptional and the quote is a gem

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2004
oh my....this is subtle, love the movement at the cry of gulls in this...brings to mind a contemporary version of some old Grimm fairytale...this is excellent!

love&light,
**Mari**

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
wow...superb....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
There is so much that is evoked in these creations of yours that it leaves me almost unable to take my next breath. Thank you, Lori. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
"searching for answers-
a lonely wife
becomes a bride"

most excellent
enjoyed the others too
that one stood out for me

Trask got it!!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Walking Alone Hands Reaching For Peace Seraching For Answers In Shadows!

TRASK

Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Every one well thought and penned. Hard to ever choose a favorite

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2004
Don't forget those Mountain Lions and bikers!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
I always love to read how your mind works;-)
Each one is wonderful Lori!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Great collection of thoughts!

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
intriguing and moving. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Lori!!!!!

you do these so well
"walking alone-
a lost child
finds fear "

LP

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Gotta agree with the Ace on this one....although your haiku
is always good...these are awesome!
My favorite, I think, is the first one.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
your poetic eye is right on target! each haiku is awesome!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
You are absolutely the best at these..........i have to track you so i don't miss out!!!
love this page tonight!!!
thanks.......pax A

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Dear Lori,

You do these so well, brilliant imagery, plenty that are food for thought, they are all so good, but the fourth one certainly says plenty. Great writes Lori.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Lori....Excellent Haiku and Senryu...Enjoyed them all...
Especially " searching for answers-
a lonely wife
becomes a bride "

Peter

Reviewed on September 24, 2004
(((lori)))

each stanza comes alive through the power of your vision--exquisitely penned! BRAVA!

i can't pick out my favorite--they are all wonderful! you raise the bar every time! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
You always amaze me. Well done

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Okay, Lori. Now where is your book? Let's have at it. ;-)

Reviewed on September 24, 2004
hello Lori, interesting piece. l&p g

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
These are lovely, Lori.

"walking alone-
a lost child
finds fear" <This one is my favorite.

Erin is right: You show direction in these verses -- I enjoyed reading.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Beautiful, Lori, with depth and simple, subtle direction of thought to tease and please a readers mind.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Gee, I love 'em all, Lori. No one does ku like you do ku. For some reason, the second one reminds me of a Georgia O'Keeffe painting. I was in Santa Fe last December for my brother's wedding, so images evoking the southwest are still close to my heart.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
wonderful collection Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
For some strange reason, Thomas Lanechanger's words "Keep The Faith" spring to mind with this excellent collection, Lori!!?? No matter what life throws at you. Search for and hold onto Truth. And "Be bold, be strong" - but maybe that's just a Christian song in the back of my head! So much can be conjured with so few hand-picked and well-placed words and sentiments. You have an exceptional gift for this Thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
another fansatic collection
Thanks for sharing
i enjoyed them all

WilliM ....peace & love

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
You do these so beautifully, these were a pleasure to read, Lori.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Love them. The second say's heaps.

Yuppers I concur with your opening gambit..

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
you are very good at these


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