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Haiku - A Set of Six
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Haiku is simply what is happening at this place in this moment- Basho


drip, drip, drip drop, burrrr-
after a shower
drip drops and goose bumps

moonbeams
softly caress her cheek-
his hand

his image-
reflected in a glass
her wedding ring

art class
painting a sunset-
let there be light

steams of light
through a stained glass window-
shadows dance with dust

capture the moment
while it remains haiku-
now a sonnet

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 Reviews of "Haiku - A Set of Six"
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
another ace trump my dear, l&p G

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Excellent as always!

Becca

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Dear Lori,

Amazing, truly enjoyed these, powerful imagery conveyed, thanks for sharing Lori, take care.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
I just loved these Lori, really atmospheric, all wonderful in their own right and together work fantastically...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Some gorgeous imagery penned here. Great atmosphere. Franz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
One feels the atmosphere in these, great Ku's.

Giving great imagery..

Really great..

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
i like the ambiance and descriptive nature of each one of these haiku's very much!

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
(((lori)))

wonderful!!!!!!!!!! love them all--first one made me smile :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Lori, I just spent the day writing poetry at Cooper's Rock overlooking the Cheat River Canyon. These haiku are the perfect way to finish my day. I raise my apple cider to you.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
love the flow of thought from one to the next. Great write!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
The last one Lori is the piece de resistance...
Glorious chain of melody...
Peter

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on October 6, 2004

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Lori you are so masterful with these, they are all beautiful but that fith one is just incredible.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
you rock at these!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
All very well done

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Lori, your haikus are obviously your love for the art. Each of them are their own testimony.
They breathe within the author's soul.
Excellent.

Lisa

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
i love how these were each and unto their own, and also flowed as one piece.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
These are once again all marvelous, Lori - especially like the last one!

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Loved all, but the first reminds me of cold winter morns. Well done Lori

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Excellent Lori...wish I could do KU-KU's!!

Thanks for sharing sis!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
This passes any test.

Reviewed on October 5, 2004
art class
painting a sunset-
let there be light

What a wonderful Haiku set. Thanks Lori


Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 5, 2004
"steams of light
through a stained glass window-
shadows dance with dust" This is my favorite.

Good work, Lori, I enjoyed reading them all.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 5, 2004
YOu set a beautiful mood with these Lori !

Reviewed on October 5, 2004
Very beautiful haiku chain, I loved these!

Reindeer


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