The Ultimate Crime - Repost from 2002 (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

Lori:

A piece of well-described feelings of a tortured soul. Keep writing...

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Lori,

Yanks at the old heart-strings - most profound & well-delivered ... excellent!!

Robert

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

(((lori)))

for being only your third poem, it's a powerhouse--flows well, rhyme is perfect--i see nothing wrong with it. it's a shattered cry from a wounded heart--keep writing, keep healing--it takes time. any time you need someone to talk to, message board me (PRIVATE)--'kay? you can bend me ear, rant, rave, i don't mind :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

So brilliant Lori! And I know what you must feel inside. Your new picture is even more beautiful than the last. Thank you dear for all your comments on Tinka and my work. Just a gentle hug for you.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Quietly, I say, Lori, that I have now discovered something we two have in common. You have eloquently and passionately spoken my mind here. We never know where we will find a bond with someone, I suppose, but this is certainly proof of why the doors of communication should never be fully closed. When I tell you I understand and deeply sympathize, you can believe me, entirely. My hands are shaking here... but I think I was meant to stop by... for this. katy xox.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

the poem is great Lori, sorry it came from sad bad times. I think we all get raped in this cruel world one way or another. It's how we handle the aftermath that makes us the person. The best thing to do is try and learn from the bad as well as the good. I'm sure you have handled this most positively. Never let anything pierce your armor. Oh many things will but the mental armor reinforced can not be penetrated. l&P G

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

A painful write here Lori, it always helped me in times of trouble to write, in the attempt to heal the wounds, you obviously have a real talent...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

Brings back PAINFUL memories for me
as well Lori. Excellent poem in rhyme
and meter.

I wish you days of healing,
joy and an abundance of laughter and
ever flowing love. You will get through
this great obstacle. I know it!
Much Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

I just have to read your bio, and that's painful enough, my heart goes out to you.

Well written, but leaves that awful feeling in ones stomach..

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

Well written, heart-wrenching write ... as it obviously should be. Sorry you had to endure this but glad you've gotten your law degree so you can put these 'bad guys' where they belong!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

Very heartfelt piece Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

They tell me forgive, they tell me let go,
but they’ve never been pierced,
so how do they know?

They don't; only the victims of these viciously horrible acts can. You've penned a powerful statement, Lori, and a heartfelt poem.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

If I had one ticket
to travel through time
I'd give it to you
to wipe the slate clean
of this horrible crime

Keep strong,

EDL

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

First of all, (only your third "attempt" at poetry? wow.) it's clear that you have quite a gift, Lori.

I am personally aware of the pain and frustration of others who believe we should "get over it already". It's extremely difficult for those who have not had the experience to understand the internal pain it causes, much of it not in our own control. (How can someone control nightmares that invade her sleep?) It is for this reason that I recently began a support group for "significant others" to the victim/Survivors of sexual assault. Thus far, those in attendance have so, so many questions. (yea!)

Thank you for having the courage to post this poem. It is only by breaking the silence that we can begin to put an end to this abominable crime.

Hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

You have great talent in sharing events that are difficult to share. This is a great write and my number one reason why such offenders need to be punished with a greater sentence. When a crime against a women is taken more seriouly, peace will follow.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Lori, I am amazed that this was your third poem. I would not call it an "attempt" by any means. Your powerful ability to write must have been inside of you for years. I'm so glad it came out for all of us to appreciate. Fantastic write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

your are a very talented poet and your talent is portrayed in this very powerful poem ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

I agree with Carmen etc...Lori this is a fantastic poem
the rhythm and rhyme are superb and the topic is handled in
an awesome way that not many could accomplish! It's an
exceptional poetic write!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Lori, I agree with Dawn. This poem does demonstrate real talent. Your words are powerful. I read them, heard them, felt them. Your power of communication is tremendous. Keep writing, and keep writing about such experience if only to yourself write it out till one day it will be outside of yourself. But please whatever you do, don't ever stop writing. You are a poet, and a talent.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Lori, this poem demonstrates your incredible talent for poetry. Your pain is palpable. I cannot imagine your journey to healing from such an experience. But I support you on that journey, and send positive energy your way. And don't you ever stop writing! Dawn

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

The sense of pain and distress is excruciating in this disturbing poem...
As I said before on this shocking issue...the perpetrators of such heinous and disgusting crimes should be castrated....
I truly hope that you can rebuild your life with dignity and decorum Lori...
Peter

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

My heart pours out to you.