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Roses - 4 Haiku
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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in between rains
the scent of the roses
still reigns

the rose garden-
a rainbow of colors
without the storm

a dozen roses
carefully chosen
die for love

aphids multiply
destroying her beauty
a cheating heart

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 Reviews of "Roses - 4 Haiku"
Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on October 23, 2004
Beauty, nature, environment, survival, sentiment, love, etc.....
All this in "Roses - 4 Haiku?" Impressive. Loved every line.

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
I have read alot of this style...and i have to tell you...you's are simply the most beautiful...never am i left wanting after reading yours...you have the ability to say so much in such a short form...simply stunning....thanx for sharing...Peace Abel

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2004
These are amazing enjoyed them all.

Amy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 18, 2004
A hard thing to do, Lori, but you've done the rose complete justice in the ways in which you have portrayed her here. Just love the third! It's hard to think of the "cost" to the rose when love presents itself in this way... TY Kate xx

Reviewed on October 17, 2004
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in between rains
the scent of the roses
still reigns

This can have many meanings in life in love and in everywhere. Anyway it just rained in my place and I can still smell the scent of the roses. Thanks for your ever so beautiful Haiku's



Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on October 17, 2004
yellow roses
a gift
for my friend


Love the third one.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 17, 2004
Lori, all of these are lovely...Roses may be carried away with the seasons, but never are they swept from our souls.
Awesome!

Lisa

Reviewed on October 17, 2004
Got to agree with Thomas below. Amazing

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Yipe Enjoyed them all!!

Excellent!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
enjoyed all 4 Lori
Beautiful write
love your haiku collections

William ....peace

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Lori, I do not know how you are able time after time to bring these glorious Haiku’s to life, but you do it so well every time! I enjoyed them all, but I especially enjoyed the second one. The simplicity of them yet the emotions you are able to stir is a shining testament to your wonderful gift as a remarkable Poet, and it is one of the main reasons why I continue to read and admire your work. Without sounding too mushy I thank you for sharing your work and talent. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Clever combination of haiku. Love them! Thank you, Lori. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
love the rains and reigns in 1, imagery of 2, sacrifice of flower in moment captured in 3, and esp. like 4 for originality... you are a master!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Blondie, these are great, can also see why you won those comp's..love 'em

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Aw, for me? For everyone! Thank you, Lori. Your haiku are always a gift. I still owe you some Charlie Brown haiku. Don't worry. They're a comin'.

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
I can breath in the lovely aroma of the first one. The second is a visual masterpiece. The third one is passionate and sad. The last one is destruction. These are magnificant. I guess the first one is my favorite.
Janet

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
a dozen roses
carefully chosen
die for love

I like them all, Lori! I wonder if people grasp how much talent simplicity requires. You've got it going on. ;-)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
No 1 for me Lori...
You make haikus look easy..and they are not !!
Peter

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
I am saving this!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Loved the third one. They're all good, though.:-)

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
This is the one I enjoyed the most:

the rose garden-
a rainbow of colors
without the storm

Reviewed on October 16, 2004
(((lori)))

all of these haiku are exceptional; my favorite is the third one--WOW

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Lori, YOur keen perception makes your haiku utterly fantastic.
I love them all, especially the third one;-)


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