i luv how you express the passion and power of perception ...
Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Very Beautiful, Lori..."Depth" is a perfect title...for the romantic overtones are much more than skin deep...I am never disapointed when I come here...keep up the great work...thanx for sharing...Peace Abel
This is beautiful, Lori. It is about grown-up love, which is much more of a challenge to write than shallow, vivid and overt ramblings. Your romantic poem has so much depth. This is excellent.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Take care,
Sherry
Lovely job here, Lori.
Peter
WOW--stunning!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Very beautiful write. Love these two lines :
The depth of your perception
exceeds the capabilities of your eyes
Well said.
Reindeer
Love Tinka
Blessed you are to be able to view forever.
Peace
God Bless
Michelle~
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