a fresh canvas, a new day’s rays
pierce the stingy clouds
liberating Tahoe
from the slumbers of night.
The echo of nature ripples
through the unseen
giving birth to heaven
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Reviews of "The Liberation"
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2004
Very Nice!! Tahoe is like Heaven. So Beautiful tahoe and your poem here of the wakening of a new day. I Love this poem!! Very nice. Thank You.
God Bless You!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2004
You can read this poem and a serenity can envelop you if you let it, because the poem is so constructed as to promote good, positive and peaceful feelings.
"Giving birth to heaven" - what a wonderful and inverse thought! Yours are the delicate brush strokes that in their brevity fill the whole canvas, Lori! TY for this delicate yet fullsome piece. LOL Kate xx
Marvelous nature write, Lori. I love Tahoe; actually got married there, and it truly is a wondrous place. (Got stranded there in a snowstorm, too, but didn't mind at all.)
Beautiful words and imagery, Lori. I can't get enough of nature.
Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2004
Lori beutiful words todescribe nature and life. Thank you too Lori for your coments on my songs. You where there when evryone else walked away. God bless you. Bill
This is one of many beautiful places in the United States that makes me wonder why anybody would want to travel to other countries when we have so much to offer right here at home.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2004
Lori, there isn’t any better site then seeing the beautiful Sierra’s covered with a fresh blanket of snow! I heard it snowed 48 inches over night! I miss being in the Sierra’s, especially around Lake Tahoe and Incline Village! I’ll make it back there some day soon. An excellent write. Thank you for sharing the visuals. Take care and be well.
God Bless You!
Love Tinka
think this poem is just fabulous! Excellent-BRAVA!
You are Wonderwoman!
Love ya!
Becca
Lori It's very lovely! How about that snow;-)
Take care,
Sherry
Evocative and descriptive visuals...
Peter
exceptional beauty in your words--LOVE the imagery and the lines,
"...a fresh canvas, a new day's rays
pierce the stingy clouds..." <----damn brilliant!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
A 'Liberating' tribute to the grandness of the Sierras - done with flair and exceptional style ... loved it!!
Robert
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