Fishing (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Donald Iarussi (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2004

wonderful

"I'M HOOKED"

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 4, 2004

Profound and deeply personal write, Lori. Great job! Awsome writing.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

awesome poem!

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

Once bitten? To be or not to be? The lady has decided. Beautiful Lori.
Reg

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

Lori,

Delightful & insightful - c'est magnifique!!

Robert

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

lori this is fantastic...i feel the weight of history making taking a chance so impossible...and in so few words

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

Deeply moving, Lori. Skillfully articulated. The necessity to be guarded is very real...
Take care, dear Poetess.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

Lori,

Excellent journey through the depths. Right or wrong she is the one who lives with her decision.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

Lori, an excellent redirection of the mind�s control over the emotional trauma left behind after being violated. It�s such a shame one must endure making these decisions. However, if that�s what it takes, then so be it.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

Good use of metaphor.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Brilliantly composed Lori!!

Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Oh, yes. Done well.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

it is better to make an empty decision than to to be full with speculation ...

nicely penned ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

If he had a "bigger" line and hook, I bet she would not have felt empty...Ed

Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Empty, she lives with her decision ... I understand Lori ... for I also live with mine.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Aw. Shucks. Party-pooper. Drat.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

This is deep fishing wonderful expression and thought in this one. Truly creative Will misss you Lori!

LP

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

It pays to be decisive and sure..Lori
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Talk about depth this is as deep as the sea and as
brilliant as a Lori Moore poem!;-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Very clever...

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

What a wonderful metaphor. She may have felt empty, but she did the right thing by leaving. You are amazing.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Hook, line and sinker in this write.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2004

Very intense write!