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Empty Race - Three Senryu
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Senryu are similar to Haiku. Some in the English Haiku movement make no distinction at all. Others place Senryu's distinction around the human condition as opposed to Haiku's focus on nature. The choice is yours...




from storefront windows-
mannequins watch passers by
avoid eye contact

a forced smile-
shallow relationships
run deep

names of the fallen-
enduring impressions
on the dark wall



I would like to thank those of you who have encouraged my Haiku efforts. This past August, I decided to test the waters beyond AD and my own web site to see if my work was worthy of publication. I submitted a small sample of work to two publications which specialize in Haiku and received news from both this past week that each plan on using at least one of my submissions. I will also have a Haiku appear on Tinywords, a website which publishes one Haiku each day. Without your encouragement, I never would have made the attempt.

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 Reviews of "Empty Race - Three Senryu"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2004
Congratulations, your the best.....

Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Congrats on the sumissions, and on another great expression of words. Well Done

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Impressions Sublime In Eye's Of (God)!

TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Congratz Lori!!

Keep it going girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Lori,

CONGRATS!! Well-crafted Senryu!!

Robert

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Lovely Senryu...I've learnt something new..Thanx...and congratulations with your submissions and publications..best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
The first one is way cool.
It's good that you submitted your work, the greatest rewards come from taking the greatest risks.

Peace

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Congratulations, Lori! I am very happy for you. All of these are great.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on November 4, 2004
Perfect. My shallow knowledge on Haiku's tells me this is outstanding. Enjoyed the middle one:
a forced smile-
shallow relationships
run deep
Congratulations.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
well done!

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Congratulations, Lori! I am so proud of you. These senryu are wonderful. You have a gift for making three lines so powerful. Not just anyone can do that. I love them all, but the second is my favorite.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
I love all three Lori and I'm so happy
for you being published! Kudo's!!!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
all wonderful and congrats on publication!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Nicely expressed, Lori. Especially like #1.
Congrats, too! ;-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Congrats! You deserve it! I have watched you growing as a poet and have enjoyed your writes. I am happy you are being recognized :-)

The one I liked best out of these three is:

"from storefront windows-
mannequins watch passers by
avoid eye contact "


Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Very intense and emotional senryu Lori
Congratulations
Peter

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Lovely composition and spectacular metaphors. An abyss of sadness.
May your aspirations be fulfilled.
Franz

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Congrats


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