Senryu are similar to Haiku. Some in the English Haiku movement make no distinction at all. Others place Senryu's distinction around the human condition as opposed to Haiku's focus on nature. The choice is yours...
from storefront windows-
mannequins watch passers by
avoid eye contact
a forced smile-
shallow relationships
run deep
names of the fallen-
enduring impressions
on the dark wall
I would like to thank those of you who have encouraged my Haiku efforts. This past August, I decided to test the waters beyond AD and my own web site to see if my work was worthy of publication. I submitted a small sample of work to two publications which specialize in Haiku and received news from both this past week that each plan on using at least one of my submissions. I will also have a Haiku appear on Tinywords, a website which publishes one Haiku each day. Without your encouragement, I never would have made the attempt.
Perfect. My shallow knowledge on Haiku's tells me this is outstanding. Enjoyed the middle one:
a forced smile-
shallow relationships
run deep
Congratulations.
Congratulations, Lori! I am so proud of you. These senryu are wonderful. You have a gift for making three lines so powerful. Not just anyone can do that. I love them all, but the second is my favorite.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
TRASK
Keep it going girl!!
Love Tinka
CONGRATS!! Well-crafted Senryu!!
Robert
It's good that you submitted your work, the greatest rewards come from taking the greatest risks.
Peace
Take care,
Sherry
a forced smile-
shallow relationships
run deep
Congratulations.
for you being published! Kudo's!!!
Congrats, too! ;-)
The one I liked best out of these three is:
"from storefront windows-
mannequins watch passers by
avoid eye contact "
Congratulations
Peter
May your aspirations be fulfilled.
Franz