Seven Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on November 10, 2004

Ahhh....best cup of tea I've ever had........

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 7, 2004

Most excellent Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

These are some of the best Haiku I've read.

Intellegently composed..

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

even in death-
the beauty of roses
linger
Of all the seven, this is the one love best. I like your creativity in composing poetry espcially Haiku's.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

I always marvel at the whimsy you capture in your haiku Lori!
Superb!

Reviewed by Elaine Carey

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

breathtaking! Your haikus are treats for the senses.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

I like the 5th one the best!
Excellent ku!
Becca

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

If There's Another Sunrise,In That valley There Will Be No Cup Of Tea
Only The Unknown Will Of (God)'s Wrath Awaits You There Are __

NO INNOCENT!

TRASK

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Love your Haikus Lori and congratulations for getting your work published...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

(((lori)))

i love them all, but

"even in death
the beauty of roses
linger"

GAD that one got me *shivers* beautifully composed imagery and thought!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

3,4 and 5 do it for me Lori....
Perfection...
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

This is the one I liked best :

"sunrays
peek through the clouds-
bashful children :

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Lori, I could just go on and on. You are a master at this. I'm with Ted. More, more! These are so lovely. They make me feel good. They start my morning off with a better attitude. I especially like the message behind number six.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

I love them all, but the last one I could live with regularly...Find Peace, Lori...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

even in death-
the beauty of roses
linger

my fav!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

These are all lovely, Lori. I liked the feel of the third one best, but all are very well done. You are the best at these.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Light and lovely, Lori.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Lori this is just meltingly beautiful! Wonderful images.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Oh Great one, give us some more.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Another Magnificent Seven; especially like the second one.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Seven deep thoughts so well penned. The Queen of Ku still reigns

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Delightful

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Love: "sunrise warms the valley - a cup of tea" Excellent
Reg.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Lori,
Your ku's are always delightful! I've never written one nor have I tried, but I don't think one could ever measure up beside you.
Enjoyed.

Lisa

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on November 6, 2004

Lori, you never fail to deliver excellence whenever you pen Haiku’s. I did enjoy them all however, the first and fifth stand out above the rest. Thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Wayne Porter

Reviewed on November 5, 2004

Haiku two and three I really enjoyed.
One of these days I'll try Haiku..
how is
Evening snack
PB&J sandwich
disappearing diet
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