Utopia (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Some kind of real, huh? You are right about that Lori. When we stand to close to a picture the more blurred it become. It is when you step back it becomes clearer. That's what you have showed us here. Thanks for sharing it in a unique way.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2004

Jesus! (sorry God) :P

This is amazing...This is what I call the real thing!

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on November 10, 2004

Karla has a sobering point. Maybe it will never happen, but the hope for it will always be there.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 10, 2004

TAKE CARE AND BE WELL

LOVE TINKA

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle

Reviewed on November 10, 2004

Lori,

Very unique, creative write! Too bad it's all a delusion!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

feel like i've been on a trip. nice writing, Lori.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

sounds more a form of dystopia ...

you choice of imagery and motif are a blend of neorealism and existentialism ... just great ...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Wow, to me, Lori, I felt a flip-flop effect. Like the word Utopia wasn't utopia, anymore. That human minds had perverted to such a degree, it no longer exists...

Sharp little composition.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Life has many puzzels and we all try to fit in the pieces.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

A glorious fantasy, Lori. Until we learn to join together for the common good and change the way money works, we are pretty much just pissin' in the wind. Brilliant write.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Superb fantasy for dreamers Lori!;-) You are
a very clever lass or shall I say laywer;-)

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Wow. This is is filled with amazing imagery. Michelle

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Lori--sobering write! Well said.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

The ways things are going Lori...its more likely to be Armageddon that we are facing...
Peter

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

"Nations blend together parasites have free reign" Wonderful expressions in this poem. It is raw and filled with truth. Utopia will never happen in this world, yet people still ask, "why? why can't we all just live in peace?"

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Okay there is a great deal of truth in this one. Interesting thoughts here Lori.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Karla,

You got it! That's the whole point... it will never happen.

Lori

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

Great insight...Did Alexander S. delete your comments too? LOL...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

(((lori)))

sounds nice, but will it happen? as long as brother rises against brother, it will never occur

beautiful sentiments, though

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)