Sagan's Toys (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Beautiful poem!!!

Reviewed by John Mayer

Reviewed on December 20, 2004

May all of your closet monsters turn into Sully from "Monsters Inc."

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2004

Awesome!
Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

(((lori)))

WOW! awesome write!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on November 14, 2004

Lori,
An Awesome and Masterful write!
Kind of scares me in a way?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Very deep!
Becca

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on November 13, 2004

an amazing poem...by chance a tribute to the departed F. Sagan?

at any rate, you evoke awesome images here, Lori...

Gina

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 13, 2004

This grabs the mind... ...and holds it. Thank you for provoking my thoughts, Lori. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

... thinks, I don't get it... but maybe that's because it's a bit before my time!!?? Is evolution and creation going on here??! A primordial pea-souper for me, Lori, as I've yet to develop into a more knowledgeable intelligent being... but for now I'll just go with the flow and say "awesome" - has my chin on the floor, anyway!! Admire your sparsity. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

Fascinating! Love the sound of "Endeared to the cover
of an archetypical closet" -- not to mention the
thoughts & emotions it evokes. Thanks!! 'Pea' <3:) <3

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

Very creative Lori, so creative I am still chewing this over.

Joy and starlight
HH

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

Memories and mist merge in
steamy wet dreams,

This one is so great and profound. It has a sweet poetic taste. You professionally created Haiku's with simple words but deep in meaning.

Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

Lori, Well done!!! A poetic explanation as to why we dream!!!

...Michael

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

This one is over my head

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

Well written Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 12, 2004

Lori this is a wonderful write as always
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

This is an amazing write, Lori. The images you paint really twist the mind into expansive thought. Great job!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

This is brilliant and frightening.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

Mind expanding write.

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

an amazing collage of uroboric images
Awesome
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

Had to look a few words up, but they described another mindful pen. Well Done

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

Very metaphysical write Lori...
Deep and profound...
Peter

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

Lori, this is great. love lines Jude picked out below. Dawn

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

i really like the imagery and this poem and the crust of its intention ...

now buried in embryonic retention

While crouched in the closet,
the tripartite brain
Exalts itself, then bows
to its own creation.

awesome!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

Awesome! Lori mesmerizing atomic mind matter yeah you blew my mind with this gem!can ew talk;-)