Pacific Sunset (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

(((lori)))

don't explain--just write. beautifully composed work--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 27, 2004

Beautifully crafted poetic expression, Lori. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 27, 2004

You have a vast reserve of words. I like how you build Haiku with fine words.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 25, 2004

... but then, sunsets are like that, Lori!! They draw more and more out of us and open us up to thoughts that are both beautiful and enigmatic - like these ones! Glad you wandered... TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on November 25, 2004

Nothing to be ashamed of, Lori. Many a time I've tried to start haiku and it ended up being too long. Sometimes poems take a mind of their own. A lot of mine never end until they decide it's time. Funny thing, that, but it gives my work an organic feel.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2004

I'm glad you were having a wordy day......This is veryy beautiful Lori!

Great to read you......I must catch up.....Oh yeah, love your profile pic too!

ty, Dani :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2004

What lady is not wordy?

Has a kinda mythical greek feel to it...

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

You are the queen of Haiku! This is a great write!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

wonderful wording ... the images are very vivid ...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Hi Sweets,

Love the simple words that create a not so simple picture. I hope that your holidays are as bright as you are my friend.

JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Well It Is Even Better Than!

TRASK

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Beauty unrivalled in a few words..Lori..
Peter

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Beautiful poem. I enjoyed it very much.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Splendid write, in it's simplicity

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

excellent as always.......
Have a great day!

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Beautiful, Lori!! So glad you continued...... (:D

Peace.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

What's a few extra words when they turn out so beautifully?!!!Lovely...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

I am so glad you elaborated on the Haiku. It gave us such beauty to ponder and appreciate.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

oh Lori, this is exquisite.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Wordy or not this is brilliant Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Lori,
Such outstanding imagery is so short a write. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Stunning

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

This is awesome, Lori. You should consider sending it to the Cousteau(sp) Society; it is a beautiful and very poignant write.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2004

Verbosely brillant.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 22, 2004

good move
you came up with a gem
a keeper
Well Penned

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on November 22, 2004

Lovely pictures and a thoughtful combination of very different levels of 'reality'. Franz

Reviewed by Kristina Wolfe (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2004

Very nice

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2004

And I am glad this is beautiful Lori!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 22, 2004

Gorgeous! I just love the visuals Lori, I can see those whales touching the sun;-)Fantastic!