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Senryu and Haiku
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after the carnival-
the helium balloon
rides the wind

a cold chill-
blank faces stare
at her open coffin

deep in her eyes-
the smiling girl
carries her anguish

the morning fog-
breaking the silence
a mallard’s call

with outstretched wings-
the black swan
lands gracefully

in the darkness-
the heron’s call
haunts her memories

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 Reviews of "Senryu and Haiku"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 15, 2010
THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK THAT HAS FEW PHRASES, IS SO VIVID! VERY WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on December 8, 2004
(((lori)))

exceptionally penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on December 7, 2004
Very nice..best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2004
I liked this one the best:

in the darkness-
the heron’s call
haunts her memories

Reviewed on December 6, 2004
The Queen of Ku shares her gift again. I really enjoyed these.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on December 6, 2004
You are such a talent Lori just awesome!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 6, 2004
They are all particularly beautiful and evocative in their own right...but I have to say 3 and 4 are striking in their intensity...Lori
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 6, 2004
I am always fascinated by your work, Lori, and this collection begs an interesting story line... I don't know whether they do, in fact, follow a thought-process, but I could always dream one up!! Funny, I have also just written about an open-grave scenario for college tomorrow! You nailed it with the smiling girl... speaks volumes. Thanks, Kate xx

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Creativity at its very best...love n luck...BHUWAN!

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
outstanding work here, Lori.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
A very creative images in the form of words and you do it so well.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Yup, they do invoke great mind pictures..

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Each one of these paints a beautiful picture, Lori. You do these so very well. I just love reading them.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Beautiful, each one of them.

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
You've got a great mind.......

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
exceptional images!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Well penned as always Lori!!

Love Them!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Excellent Lori. :)

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
The first one absolutely blew me away! (no pun intended) Brilliant, brilliant! That's all I can say about your work, Lori.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Brilliant, a word I associate with your talents too,

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
I love this Lori, makes one think.

Felix

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on December 4, 2004
4 is haiku to perfection as 3 is for senyru... all are haunting

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 4, 2004
All are wonderful Lori, I too like what AbdiNoor chose, but also the last one it is haunting;-)

Reviewed on December 4, 2004
the morning fog-
breaking the silence
a mallard’s call

Fantastic. I go with this one.


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