You stumbled over the truth one day
then quickly got up going on your way
You brushed off the truthful residue
you’d have none of that sticking to you
Your mind is set, your “facts” are clear
your helpless dreams are insincere
Rant on little poet, like an impotent man
who can’t please his lover without using his hand
Rant on little poet, dream on little man
you’ll find your peace dripping from your hand
Note: I meant this to be funny. It is not directed at any one individual. If anyone is paranoid enough to think is, perhaps it should be. I hope the message is not too abstract. Thanks for reading.
LOL...this is hilarious. I had to come read this before reviewing your new one, thinking they might be connected. And yes, they are. LOL...too funny Lori. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2004
Lori, a very unique well-penned observation you’ve composed here, Poet. Take good care and be well.
Lori, I know you are good, but I'm afraid I'm lost on this one. But, I know one thing. I'm with Tracey. I really hate shaking hands with anyone, especially men!
Lori, quite the different write for you, but one that is not only done well, but stands out as one of your very best.
SMS..small man syndrome..has spread throughout..excellent write!
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now that's telling 'im LOL in a creative way--enjoyed
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Love Tinka
Great blog also!~;-)
And you hit the mark with a cutting edge..
Hilarious is the put down...
Peter
SMS..small man syndrome..has spread throughout..excellent write!
Lisa
Have a hoppy Christmas.....
Felix