The Double Standard (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

very true Lori...many do not even see the nose on their face, but point out everyhing wrong with their friend's nose. Thnx for sharing Lori. May the Lord be with you, and at your side always. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), your very dear friend from Wisconsin, and sister in Christ our Lord,

Barbara Lynn Terry
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Hurts to laugh. Such truth.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Wow Lori! Powerful
message it conveys!
Most Excellent!
Becca

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on December 19, 2004

As you have often pointed out, to me, to others, Lori, and wisely so, "it works both ways"... but then, that's the point, isnt it? katy.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Blimey nail on head here..Wist some guy, S.P, could read this.

If you do Mr S.P. I only delete you kind words..not.

Hope the correct people look in this mirror...
T

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Stunning irony. Powerful message, Lori. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

(((lori)))

BAMMMMMMMMM! SPOT ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *STANDING O*

you hit right between the eyes--good on you! expert marksman you are with your thought provoking words!

(((HUGS))) and love and MERRY CHRISTMAS, karla. :)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

You could say this fits the Wisconsin hunters to a tee.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

Amen. Fire away, my friend.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

Pointed and well done Lori, but I think most hunters realize when they are using their weapons.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

Lori, far too many seem to forget, that they live in a glass house. An excellent write. Thanks for sharing it. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

Yes very excellent. I admire the way some of the writers here can give so strong a message in so few lines. Great work, Lori.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

What a stunning message! The perception is dramatic. Although this is my land I have no problem with total strangers coming on it and killing its wildlife, personal property means nothing in America anymore. Oh, if you get cold out there on my property come on to the house, maybe the wife can fix you a good meal, maybe a stiff drink afterward, might as well bed her down while you are at it. I have a marriage certificate that say she and I belong to each other, but what the heck, have at her.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

Excellent Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

Bulls-eye. You are a clever writer Lori. ~ Sara

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

happy holidays, in all ways. miss our interaction. Great piece, got me to thinking. I guess we all hunt in some ways. Thrill of the hunt, got to watch for those warning signs though. Of course some don't get it until the bullet hits their behind. Of course how thrilling is it to hunt in safe places? oh well, take care. l&p G

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Ah, the beam in one's own eye. Excellent!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Word! .....Profound
yet powerful statement

Willia.....Peace & love

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

We often see reflections without recieving the lesson that is being taught. We bring into our lives what is needed whether we understand it or not.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Good point, I like it.

Felix