Haiku & Senryu - A Set of Seven (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Nice write Lori. I liked this one
Dale Hudgins

Reviewed by A. Gagn� (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2004

Where would Man be without the beautiful mystique of Woman's changing mood and irrepressible tears... probably still in a cave, grunting. Necessity is the mother of invention.

Something in the way she smiles...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

These were very lovely haikus, beautiful thoughts Lori,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

No matter how many you post, I'm always drawn into each set with ease. Excellant Lori

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2004

wonderful depiction.. I can almost see some of the scenes you describe.. :) so pretty.
thanks for sharing, happy holidays,
~Kari Anne~

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 29, 2004

Yup, you've just about summed up the inner and outer landscapes in your inimitable succinct and masterful fashion! Each word worthy of its place and should be captured before, like snowflakes, it melts away...no flimsy or whimsy here! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 29, 2004

Wonderful poetry Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2004

Lori--you do these so well and make it look so effortless. I envy your talent. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2004

random snowflakes-
autumn leaves
kiss the ground

I've seen the Pope do that too.

Thanks for your weather update Lori..

Done in your delightful way...

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on December 29, 2004

These are really lovely Lori....I especially like the first one!

Andrea

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

A lovely collections you present here
enjoyed much

William .....Peace

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Ahhhh.........perfect ending to the day. Lori, you always know how to put a cherry on top.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Each one has a life of its own, Lori. All beautiful and gentle. You are the Ku-Pro-U-No?
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Wonderful creations all, Lori. Blessings of love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Every one a beauty....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

all very nice ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

What a wonderful way of saying you love snow too. Seriously wonderful write Lori. Great piece.

Felix

Reviewed by robin buehler

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

esp. like the second one makes me think why there were tears on christmas. a ring perhaps?

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

You mean there is such a thing as fresh sheets...? Guess I will have to go out and buy me a set...good to see you still knocking out these great Haiku...Peace and Happy New Year, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

You are most wonderful doing these..
Have a great 05!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Simple and sweet, captures the moment well

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Without a Warning
Only Moments Of Sorrow
Gone Forever
Moments Of Joy...

TRASK

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

nicely done

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

Ahh, yes. Winter in California. You bring back memories, Lori.

Ron

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

~You my friend are such a talent`
~I enjoyed them all~`*

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

All wonderful , I've missed you! Superb Ku!;-)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 28, 2004

(((lori)))

all are exquisite, my favorite is

"snowflakes
the perfect picture
without a flash" *grins* this one so lovely

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)