'snowflakes
on new years day
fall on last year's bed " The best haiku of the five! Ypir Haikus are very nice. I like Haiku very much. We can expres so much within 17 syllables or even less!Thank you
I think this should fill my haiku prescription for now, thank you. The first and third ones are my faves. Keep 'em comin', Lori.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Lori, they’re all exceptional, but I do favor the fourth one. I do prefer the sun’s shimmering golden rays and its warmth over the cold weather any time. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing them all.
The third one got me grinning, Lori. These are all stunningly beautiful. You are so good at Haiku. Take your well deserved bow, Lori, as I applaud you!
Take care,
Sherry
I happily cozied up to each of these, Lori... and smiled at its entirety... like a door, left open to enter a warm, friendly place. Really lovely! (The "up side" of winter. hehe) katy xox.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
I think that I am beginning to understand this form and well no matter how it is written well.
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on new years day
fall on last year's bed " The best haiku of the five! Ypir Haikus are very nice. I like Haiku very much. We can expres so much within 17 syllables or even less!Thank you
Love Tinka
I love them all. You've brought out the beauty of the cold, snowy winter. You do write great haiku! Thanks for sharing.
Cynthia
Peace, Carole
Tonight snow falls and I love to watch just as I love to read your poetry.
Happy New Year,
Gina
Take care,
Sherry
but smiled most at the first :)
Great write Lori,
Felix
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
there are few that can write such beautiful, meaningful haiku. you are one that can. these are absolutely stunning! my favorite is
snowflakes
on new year's day
fall on last years bed <----------sheer brilliance! *smiles*
(((HUGS))) and love, and may 2005 be your best year EVER, karla. :)
Loved it beaut..