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Five Winter Haiku
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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snowflakes
on new years day
fall on last year's bed

freshly fallen snow-
a cozy bed
beneath the freeze

racing the sun-
one last skate
on the thawing pond

melting the freeze-
the morning sun
a tender kiss

christmas morning-
the moment of impact
an old sled
  

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 Reviews of "Five Winter Haiku"
Reviewed on April 25, 2005
'snowflakes
on new years day
fall on last year's bed " The best haiku of the five! Ypir Haikus are very nice. I like Haiku very much. We can expres so much within 17 syllables or even less!Thank you

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
I love your haikus. they are done so well

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 9, 2005
Wonderful work yet again Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
I think this should fill my haiku prescription for now, thank you. The first and third ones are my faves. Keep 'em comin', Lori.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Lori, they’re all exceptional, but I do favor the fourth one. I do prefer the sun’s shimmering golden rays and its warmth over the cold weather any time. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing them all.

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Lori,

I love them all. You've brought out the beauty of the cold, snowy winter. You do write great haiku! Thanks for sharing.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
Great write!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
a series of cold moods ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
delightful haiku Lori...well written

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
I love haiku and these are beautifully captivating and expressive, Lori. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Enchanting, Lori.

Tonight snow falls and I love to watch just as I love to read your poetry.

Happy New Year,
Gina

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
All greatness.......

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Wondrous Ku Lori, I love that first one, so sentimental!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
The third one got me grinning, Lori. These are all stunningly beautiful. You are so good at Haiku. Take your well deserved bow, Lori, as I applaud you!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
all splendid
but smiled most at the first :)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
I happily cozied up to each of these, Lori... and smiled at its entirety... like a door, left open to enter a warm, friendly place. Really lovely! (The "up side" of winter. hehe) katy xox.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
I think that I am beginning to understand this form and well no matter how it is written well.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Exceptional Haiku's.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Teasing images of a winter of old, spark the imagination.
Great write Lori,

Felix

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
You made snow more inticing than snow itself. These are beautiful.

Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Wonderful scenic Haiku's! Thank you Lori!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on January 7, 2005
(((o, lori)))

there are few that can write such beautiful, meaningful haiku. you are one that can. these are absolutely stunning! my favorite is

snowflakes
on new year's day
fall on last years bed <----------sheer brilliance! *smiles*

(((HUGS))) and love, and may 2005 be your best year EVER, karla. :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
These bring back the odd boyhood memory, when we used to have snow..

Loved it beaut..


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