Haiku and Senryu (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 23, 2005

That is what I mean. The lightness, the natural depth of the things you say. It speaks straight to the heart.
You have made an achievement which is quite relevant to literature by transforming Haiku, originally expressing itself through the description of landscapes and flowers solely, into a portrait of emotional states without abandoning any of the artful sketchlike aphorism characterising it.
You are a master of this form and you are among my favourite authors.
All my best wishes
Mahdi

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 22, 2005

A good slice of life, solid work.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on January 22, 2005

Here I was, just about to log off. And then I find these gems posted on the den. I've said it before and I'll say it again: A perfect way to end the day.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2005

'generational seeds'... 'dimming light'... 'emotion-...displayed on a shirt sleeve'

This gently melancholy telling is filled with mind pictures, Lori... personal, yet so accessible to my own thought-wanderings... I loved the path you took me down in this. Really lovely. katy xox.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 22, 2005

valuable haiku to ponder ... enjoyed these ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

You do these so well, Lori. What a wonderful offering for which I am very grateful. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

very very good, Lori. you work this particular form for all its worth.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Your the best!
Hope all is well with ya!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

You are the best at this kind of writings
and they all are very well put together
i always have a favorite and it's the second one
enjoyed you

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

All great, but placed deeper thoughts on the last. The queen of Ku shines again

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Wonderfully written, but-of-course!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Lori,

These are very exceptional. Beautiful messages in all of them.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Wonderful work yet again!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

As always, wonderful work

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

a splendid write...

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

This poem says so many things in such vivid way.
You are amazing.
Tracey

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

excellent Write
Well Penned

William ......Peace & Love

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

These are awwwrsum duude, yawl did a fiiinnne re-ale neat woe-ark ov arteee haar.

Sure niice to see yer com ba-ek noow-eew,
(Lori thinks...English pratt)

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

good 'ku

i especially like the last one

john+

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Awesome writing, Lori. Each one a special treasure. Very, very nicely done!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

super sublime poetess! G

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Beautiful in any form that you put it.