Lori, you can make three lines take the reader away into infinite lines and stories. I love them all. The second one reminds me to keep going even if the wind is against me.
Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
Lori--your talent is incredible. I love when you do these. You are indeed the queen of haikus.
Just beautiful, Lori. I especially liked fisherman's net and grandmother's kitchen.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
Capital write. to Cap it all, one can visualise the blokes with their ruddy weathered skin, the noise of the geese, as they wake me up each and everyday, in there gaggles, the sea doin' a bita splashin'
Great to read you, you ain't bin hanging around AD town of late.
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enjoyed them all
William ....peace & Love
Good to see you posting;-)
Eileen
Take care,
Sherry
Felix
Great to read you, you ain't bin hanging around AD town of late.
Nicely done Lori...
Exquisite 'ku! Particularly loved # 2 and 4 :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
"age old traditions
carefully handed down-
grandmother’s kitchen "