Haiku - A Set of Five (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 14, 2005

Past The Horizon-Vanity By The Pool!

TRASK

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2005

great write...

vesna*

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 14, 2005

you capture the spirit of the summer in these ...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on June 13, 2005

nice stuff, lori. really like #1!!!
best,
carolyn

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on June 13, 2005

Wow-zah.!! This is terrific, Lori. The
images you have chosen speak volumes. True
poetry!!
Just sign me Awe Struck

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 13, 2005

Lori,

Each one comes to life and brings different emotions and visions; all combine to make stellar haiku! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on June 13, 2005

92 degrees is certainly one I can relate to here in PA lately

well done haiku :)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

Hi Lori- Your haikus are so upbeat.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

Perfect way to relax on a Sunday. Thanks, Lori.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

Splendid Haiku's

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

These are great and so unique.
I enjoyed the thoughts within.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

I just got out of the pool..
Great as always.....

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

Excellent summertime writes...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

I've missed your haiku's Lori, so good to read these, all wonderful!

Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

Summertime, summertime, summertime, gotta love it.

Felix

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

These are all superb, Lori, as you always do. I love the 4th one. It is very dry here, but I have lived in that type of humidity before and it can really knock you out. I am saving this, each one is fantastic.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

Lori
thanks for this collection
excellent writes
enjoyed them all

William ......Peace & Love

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

Hi new kid on the block.

92 degrees
90 percent humidity-
melting in san antone

No way could I last in that kinda weather.
I'm melting
I'm melting
Would be my final words..

Nice ku from you..

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on June 12, 2005

OMG I love this last one Lori. I wish I had everything completed so I could qwear a two piece, maybe even a string bikini (giggles). Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little terrified sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."