Haiku - A Set of Four (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

LOVE that last one, Lori. My grandma lives on a farm with a barn just like that.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Beautiful haiku, Lori. Each one stands on its own merit--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

Hi Gorgeous,

This is a lovely piece, I have one similar posted called 'Seasons', it's my one and only. This is more the Japanese version, no? I am sleepy, it's 5:46AM, lol. Mine is just the regular ole 5-7-5.

Take Care, Janny xoxoxo

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

Dear Lori,

Nice to be back and reading your wonderful work. These are amazing, but admittedly, the third one really touched me. Beautifully penned Lori.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

You are a master of this artform, Lori. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

each haiku is an excellent visualization ...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Always great to read your ku's...
Hope life is being go0d to you Lori..

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

As On The Vine Leans On Into Its Shadow-- Gone As Humanity Soon Will Be!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Hi Lori! I have missed your wonderful writes. These are all outstanding, though I like the last one the best. The visual in that one is fantastic.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Oh rules are made for one reason only...to break them yeah!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Each one is a gem of evocative poetry, Lori. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

You know how, when you read something and out comes a completely involuntary gasp or sound of some kind, Lori? That's exactly what happened when I read that last verse... the barn leaning on its shadow... that's brilliant imagination... amazing expression! My other favorite was the first verse... very creative, peaceful bow to nature. All of it is just wonderful! katy xox.

Reviewed by A. Keith Barton

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Love the haiku--the seasonal references and nature's calling to us; great write, Lori

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Ahhhh Lori you have such a talented gift in your haikus...woberful

Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Like them all, Lori, as well as the Basho quote!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

These are all great. I especially love the last one