Haiku - A Set (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

Beautiful writing Lori!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

A wonderful series of haiku, Lori. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Love the way you ended this set with a childs dream!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

hello Lori, super haiku, it's a hundred dgrees blowing through the knees here in bmore. keep cool

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

tired bedtime eyes-
one last story
ignites young dreams

"I'm not tired daddy read me more, read me more. Zzzzzzz"

A delight for both. Awake and tired sight.
I think I would bliming well faint in 100 degrees!

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

A well thought out poem. Very artistic with great insight. excellent write.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

That last one is so true, Lori. As a kid, I'd always let that last comicbook or tv show take me on my way to dreamland.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Lori,

The 'ku master has struck again! You convey so much in so few words--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

I like this more eclectic collection, Lori, and it seems to me like a camera fast-forwarding through the day in a small-town community, for some reason. The first just does it for me - perfect and scintillating! Love it! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

I have my own personal problems with haiku if it isn't in the classic 5-7-5 syllables. Also, I think (could be wrong) that haiku is specifically about nature, whereas the senryu is about everything but nature. Still, I can't say that I didn't enjoy reading these efforts by you. Very nice, indeed!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

all are exceptional in both motif and affect ... the first two are my favorites ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Masterfully done, Lori - as always. And I can really relate to the third one lately - 105 degrees here Sunday.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Excellent....you are the Ku-Princess!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

You compose the loveliest Haikus