Haiku - A Set of Six (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

sudden down pour, my shadow finds shelter before me. In order to have a shadow we need a sun LOri. I continue to go in that direction, may we make millions of shadows. Feel thousands of suns. The sun inside lives to smile the shadow. My shadow at times wants to frown but my sun keeps to the clown. Shadows, clowns, and suns and your haiku

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

You have it Lori! Few words, much said.
Exceptional!
Chanti

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 10, 2005

sudden downpour-
my shadow finds shelter
before me

Dear Lori...what a write...priceless my friend...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

Lori, these are so lovely. I love the last one

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

This is sooo good..wish I could write descent ku

well practise makes perfect ..they say..yeah right..
You are a master at this..wow!!

vesna

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

these are all excellent though i am partial to the fifth ku ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

A haiku treasure trove that I am grateful I found. Thank you, Lori.

Love and peace and all good to you.

Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

In The Breeze
Cools The (Mind) Night!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

The two that touched me the most are:

sudden downpour-
my shadow finds shelter
before me

And:

evening star-
with a wish
i touch heaven

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

the scent of roses-
mixed with memories
grandmother’s perfume

When I were kid. My grandpa slept in my bed, whilst I top tailed with another sibling. I never let dad change grandpas sheets cos I loved the smell of the lavender scent that the 90 yr young feller left there.
Now when I smell lavender, brings back memories of over 30 year ago.

Reading these I kinda feel that people of certain ilk have much in common.

I tilt me hat to these..

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Lori, I tend to agree with the others’ as it seems these wonderful Haiku’s continue to flow from your quill with ease. I enjoyed them all, but the second and last ones hit closer to home. Thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

Lovely, Lori!

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

It is amazing how you can take so few simple words and create an explosion of the senses.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

these are almost a progression, 1,3, and 5 are my faves:) Nice work.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

Nice little set, Lori.

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

The princess of haiku has again created beauty...Ed

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

So evocative and nostalgic at the same time: especially like grandmother's perfume - spot on! All is well in this ideal world, Lori - as is in your ku. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

Lovely haiku's Lori!

peace, Carole

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

I can always tell by your haiku how much you respect their uniqueness. You make them all so special...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

Wonderful Ku delivery!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

Sounds like one winner of a day to me. Nice Ku's Lori.
Felix

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

Lori,

Great choice of words that creates wonderful imageries! Once again you have mastered the Haiku's expertly with great skills!

Enjoyed these greatly!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

All splendid....
Have a great day!

Reviewed by A. Keith Barton

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

I enjoy your haiku poems; melodious and mellifluous; your communion with nature is self-evident.

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

"my shadow finds shelter
before me"

Shadows are such funny things. I thoroughly enjoyed these Haiku. Well done...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

The third and 5th are my favorites, Lori, but all evoke sweet memories to be sure. Great Ku, as you always do. It is good to see a post from you.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

I agree with George, and the second one is my very favorite since I often fondly think of my grandmother when I smell a certain flower.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

I liked all of these Lori, but I think my fav would have been,

sudden downpour-
my shadow finds shelter
before me

It seems to speak to the oneness.
Excellent Ku's.

Lisa

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

You are the Queen of Haiku's. Each one is a gem and leaves a message that a thousand words could not convey as well.